【題目】假定英語課上老師要求同桌之間交換修改作文，請你修改你同桌寫的以下作文。文中共有10處語言錯誤，每句中最多有兩處。每處錯誤僅涉及一個單詞的增加、刪除或修改。

增加：在缺詞處加一個漏字符號(∧)，并在其下面寫出該加的詞。

刪除：把多余的詞用斜線(＼)劃掉。

修改：在錯的詞下畫一橫線，并在該詞下面寫出修改后的詞。

注意：1. 每處錯誤及其修改均僅限一詞；

2. 只允許修改10處，多者(從第11處起)不計分。

When the earthquake was happened in 2008 my aunt was still a little girl in small county in Sichuan. Today, she can well remember doctors and nurses in white overalls which were busy day and night save the injured in our hometown. It was then when she made up her mind to be someone like them. Her dreams came true after she graduated from a local medical school. On January 2020, when bad news came that Hubei was badly in need of doctors and nurses to fight COVID-19, she applied to be there to help out but her application was approved. Before she leaves, she told us she was grateful for what people did for us after the earthquake and that she had decided to pay them forward.

【答案】1. was 刪掉。2. in small之間加a。3. which→who/that。4. save→saving。5. when→that。6. dreams→dream。7. On→In。8. but→and。9. leaves→left。10. them→it。

【解析】

這是一篇記敘文。本文通過記敘作者的阿姨在地震中的所見所聞立志成為一名醫(yī)生，最終成為醫(yī)生支援武漢抗疫的故事。

1. 考查動詞時態(tài)。這里地震發(fā)生是在2008年，是過去發(fā)生的事情，故用過去時態(tài)。happened是不及物動詞，沒有被動，不必再多余添加was。故講was 刪掉。

2. 考查不定冠詞。根據(jù)句意，我阿姨生活在一座小縣城里面。一座小城，應(yīng)該使用不定冠詞來表達in a small county。故在in small county 之間加上不定冠詞a。

3. 考查關(guān)系代詞。根據(jù)句子結(jié)構(gòu)分析得知句子的先行詞為doctors and nurses，故為人，引導(dǎo)詞應(yīng)該為引導(dǎo)人的關(guān)系代詞作定語從句，使用that是因為前面的先行詞為復(fù)數(shù)特指所有的醫(yī)護人員。故將which改成who/that。

4. 考查現(xiàn)在分詞作補足語。句意是日夜忙碌著拯救我家鄉(xiāng)的受傷者。be busy doing… 忙于作……。故將save改成saving。

5. 考查強調(diào)句型。這里表示的結(jié)構(gòu)是強調(diào)句型，故根據(jù)結(jié)構(gòu)構(gòu)成it was then that…就是在那個時候她決定成為一名像他們一樣的人。故將when改成that。

6. 考查名詞的單復(fù)數(shù)。根據(jù)上下文，她的夢想就是這一個要成為他們一樣的人。名詞dream是單數(shù)形式。故將dreams改成dream。

7. 考查介詞。在表示月份的時候只需要用in即可。故將On改成In。

8. 考查并列連詞。她申請去武漢抗疫，然后被同意了。這兩件事是并列的兩件事，是不帶轉(zhuǎn)折關(guān)系的并列。故將but改成and。

9. 考查時態(tài)。在她離開去武漢之前，她告訴我們說……。這里告訴我們說是過去時態(tài)，根據(jù)狀語從句跟隨主句的時態(tài)變化而變化的規(guī)律，應(yīng)該也是過去時態(tài)，故將leaves改成left。

10. 考查代詞。根據(jù)句意，她決定付出自己的努力為在地震中為他們付出的醫(yī)護人員而獻身。這里pay it forward中應(yīng)該使用it，因為她決定做的事情是一件事情。故將them改成it。

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