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2．假設你是紅星中學高三（1）班的學生李華，校報英文版正在開展"續(xù)寫雷鋒日記"活動．請根據(jù)以下四幅圖的先后順序，將你所做的一件好事以日記形式記述下來，向校報投稿．
注意：
（1）日記的開頭已為你寫好．
（2）詞數(shù)不少于60．

Answer 1

分析 本文是圖畫類作文，要求根據(jù)四幅圖的先后順序及所給內容要點將所做的一件好事以日記形式記述下來，既是情景作文又是一種提綱作文．在寫作時，描述圖片應以第一、三人稱和過去時態(tài)為主．根據(jù)情景的發(fā)展，抓住細節(jié)按順序安排好材料．重要短語：look puzzled（看起來迷惑），sb be lost（某人迷路），go up to sb （走到某人跟前…．），look for （尋找），appreciate one's help （感謝某人的幫助），wave good-bye to sb（跟某人再見）．

解答 Saturday，June 2                                    Fine
This morning，when I was walking on the street，I saw that two travelers were reading a map，looking puzzled．It seemed they were lost．（發(fā)現(xiàn)） I went up to them and asked how I could help．They told me they were looking for the Temple of Heaven．（詢問） I led them to the nearby bus stop and advised them to take Bus No.20，which could take them there directly．【高分句型】（告訴線路）They appreciated my help directly．Before long，the bus came，we waved good-bye to each other．Seeing them on the bus，I felt a kind of satisfaction．（分別）

點評 寫好這類圖片及提綱式作文的關鍵是認真分析所給提示信息，靈活運用英語知識，采用不同的表達方式將要點完整地表述出來，并認真看圖，圍繞主題，提煉要點，發(fā)揮想象，語言力求準確、簡潔．選用合適的連接詞或過渡詞，使文章具有一定的連貫性．同時也要注意使用高級詞匯和高級句型使文章顯得更有檔次，最后還要認真查驗是否有漏寫情況，有無拼寫錯誤及標點誤用等．