Question

3．你將向?qū)W校的英語網(wǎng)站投稿介紹年度熱詞"自拍照"（selfie）．
寫作內(nèi)容
請根據(jù)以下內(nèi)容，寫一篇關(guān)于自拍照的介紹．
定義：人們給自己拍的照片，通常用手機(jī)拍攝并分享到互聯(lián)網(wǎng)上．
起源：2002年，一位澳大利亞人在某論壇上傳了一張自己 的照片，并把照片稱為"selfie"．
現(xiàn)狀：（1）"selfie"以及自拍行為越來越流行；
 （2）牛津詞典把"selfie"列為"2013年度詞匯"．
評論：（1）自拍表達(dá)人類希望分享的需求，促進(jìn)溝通；
（2）自拍讓人過于在意自己的外貌，忽視內(nèi)在美．
參考詞匯：論壇 forum        牛津Oxford
寫作要求
只能使用5個句子表達(dá)全部內(nèi)容．
評分標(biāo)準(zhǔn)
句子結(jié)構(gòu)準(zhǔn)確，信息內(nèi)容完整，篇章結(jié)構(gòu)連貫．
定義]A"selfie"is a photo taken of oneself，usually with a cell phone，and shared online．[起源]The word was first used in 2002 by an Australian who posted his self-taken picture on a web forum accompanied by the caption"selfie"．[現(xiàn)狀]Since then，the popularity of the word itself and the act it describes have exploded worldwide and in 2013"selfie"was named"word of the year"by the Oxford Dictionary．[評論]Supporters believe that the taking and posting of selfies reflects the human need to connect and communicate with others．However，critics argue that selfies let people attach too much importance to appearance but little to inner beauty．．

Answer 1

分析 這是一篇介紹selfie的提綱類作文，內(nèi)容要點(diǎn)包括：定義；起源；現(xiàn)狀以及評論．
高級詞匯、短語和高分句型：
accompany 動詞，伴隨，陪伴；
popularity 名詞，流行，受歡迎；
attach too much importance to  認(rèn)為…有重要性；
高分句型（一）
A"selfie"is a phototaken of oneself，usually with a cell phone，and shared online．
taken和 shared 兩個過去分詞在句子里做后置定語修飾 a photo，表示被動；
高分句型（二）
The word ①was first used in 2002 by an Australian ②who posted his self-taken picture on a web forum accompanied by the caption"selfie"．
①用了被動語態(tài)；
②who引導(dǎo)定語從句

解答 A"selfie"is a photo①taken of oneself，usually with a cell phone，and shared online．（定義） The word was first used in 2002 by an Australian ②who posted his self-taken picture on a web forum accompanied by the caption"selfie"．（起源） Since then，the popularity of the word itself and the act it describes have exploded worldwide and in 2013"selfie"was named"word of the year"by the Oxford Dictionary．（現(xiàn)狀） Supporters believe that the taking and posting of selfies reflects the human need to connect and communicate with others．（評論）However，critics argue that selfies let people attach too much importance to appearance but little to inner beauty．

點(diǎn)評 這是一篇提綱類的文章，有一定難度．考生在寫作時(shí)，首先要涵蓋所有要點(diǎn)；其次，不能簡單翻譯句子，要使用一些高級詞匯和句式來表達(dá)．要求考生在平時(shí)學(xué)習(xí)中擴(kuò)大詞匯量以及儲備一定量的高級句式．