Question

假如你是李華，是一位高中生。隨著科技的發(fā)展，iPad已經(jīng)成為中學(xué)生的新寵。用iPad即可以聽音樂，閱讀電子文書，又可以玩電子游戲。請你用英語給某英語報社寫一封信，談?wù)勚袑W(xué)生使用iPad的情況。信的內(nèi)容必須包括以下幾點：
1.使用對學(xué)習(xí)的好處；
2.對課堂紀(jì)律和學(xué)習(xí)可能產(chǎn)生的負(fù)面影響；
3.提出自己的建議
注意：開頭已經(jīng)給出，不計入總數(shù)。詞數(shù)120字左右
Dear editor,
I’m a senior high school student, named Li Hua.
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Yours sincerely,
Li Hua

Answer 1

Dear editor,
I’m a senior high school student, named Li Hua. Now many students have iPads and think it’s a fashion to use them. Using an iPad, we can listen to music, download a lot of learning materials and read them on the screen. Apparently, it is helpful to our study, especially to our English listening.
Some students, however, bring their iPads to classrooms and listen to music with earphones, which makes the teacher and other students greatly annoyed. What’s worse, some of them even waste precious time in class playing video games.
In my opinion, as a student, we should make good use of iPads to help achieve academic success. The classroom is a place for students to study, and therefore concentration is awfully needed for us to learn our lessons. Furthermore , the school should make a rule to guide the students to use iPads in a proper way.
Yours sincerely,
Li Hua

解析試題分析：這是一篇英文書信，信的開頭結(jié)尾都已經(jīng)給出了，只要寫好正文，寫信與寫文章一樣，要分段寫，每段有一個中心思想，內(nèi)容要表達清楚，語言要簡單明了，態(tài)度要誠懇禮貌。給親友的信還應(yīng)親切熱情�？荚嚂r必須把規(guī)定的內(nèi)容寫清楚。正文結(jié)束時，還可寫一兩句表達心愿的話，如：Best wishes to you ／Remember me to your family ／Hoping to hear from you soon等。
考點:考查英文書信
點評;寫作正文時就和寫提綱作文一樣，要點不能省略，要完全包括在內(nèi)。要注意使用合適的連接詞和高級的詞匯和短語，也可以使用不同的句式。