Question

10．請根據(jù)以下提示，并結(jié)合事例，用英語寫一篇短文．
　　We all know that"sticks and stones may break our bones"，but we should also be aware that words can hurt people，too．
注意：①無須寫標題，不得照抄英語提示語；
　　  ②除詩歌外，文體不限；
　　  ③文中不得透露個人姓名和學校名稱；
     ④詞數(shù)為120左右．

Answer 1

分析 本文是開放性作文，根據(jù)所給提示，以此為話題進行思維和聯(lián)想，自由發(fā)揮并結(jié)合具體事例，寫一篇短文．在寫作時以第一人稱和第三為主，時態(tài)以一般過去時為主．重要短語：volunteer to do （自愿做某事），burst into laughter （突然大笑起來），turn red（變紅），learn from sth（獲悉某事），drop out of school（輟學），in both positive and negative ways（以積極和消極的方式），avoid doing（避免做某事）．

解答 My deskmate admires my fluent English very much and I usually feel encouraged by his compliments．One day，when we learned the new word"eccentric"in class，we were asked to make a sentence with it．I volunteered to do it by saying"My deskmate is an eccentric boy whose clothes never fit him．"Hearing this，the whole class burst into laughter and my deskmate's face turned red．After class，I learned from the teacher that my deskmate would have dropped out of school if he hadn't been helped by others．【高分句型】My mindless words must have hurt him deeply．（具體事例）
　　Not until then did I realize words could be powerful in both positive and negative ways．【高分句型】We should avoid hurting others if we can't always be encouraging when we speak．（深化主題）

點評 開放性作文給出一定的寫作主題，并此為基礎進行思維和聯(lián)想，自由發(fā)揮．不僅考查學生在內(nèi)容、結(jié)構(gòu)安排、語言運用和組織方面的能力，而且對學生的想像力、發(fā)散思維、歸納判斷能力也有很高的要求．寫好這類作文要注意幾個步驟：1． 認真審題，找準提示語中的關(guān)鍵詞或句，確定中心思想．2． 依據(jù)關(guān)鍵句，草擬提綱，梳理文章的脈絡3． 準確定位人稱、時態(tài)．注意使用高級詞匯和高級句型使文章顯得更有檔次．4．最后還要認真查驗是否有漏寫情況，有無拼寫錯誤及標點誤用等．