Question

【題目】假定英語課上老師要求同桌之間交換修改作文，請(qǐng)你修改你同桌寫的以下作文。文中共有10處語言錯(cuò)誤，每句中最多有兩處。每處錯(cuò)誤僅涉及一個(gè)單詞的增加、刪除或修改。

增加：在缺詞處加一個(gè)漏字符號(hào)(∧)，并在其下面寫出該加的詞。

刪除：把多余的詞用斜線(\)劃掉。

修改：在錯(cuò)的詞下劃一橫線，并在該詞下面寫出修改后的詞。

注意：1.每處錯(cuò)誤及其修改均僅限一詞；

2.只允許修改10處，多者(從第11處起)不記分。

Dear Mr. Brown，

I am writing to thank you with your kind help. Before you came to teach us, I had not interest in English. My pronunciation was terribly. I could only speak a few words. But one and a half year later, I now think English fun to learn. I got a lot from your encouraging words. I would always remember what you said. “If you try to, you can be No.1！” I hope you’ll have a pleasant journey home but will come to China again sometimes in the future, I will write again and send you photos we take together.

Answer 1

【答案】DearMr.Brown，

I am writing to thank you your kind help. Before you came to teach us, I had interest in English. My pronunciation was. I could only speak a few words. But one and a half later, I now think English fun to learn. I got a lot from your encouraging words. I always remember what you said.“If you try , you can be No.1！”I hope you’ll have a pleasant journey home will come to China again in the future, I will write again and send you photos we together.

【解析】第一處：固定搭配thank sb for sth因?yàn)槟呈赂兄x某人。故with改成for。

第二處：這里的interest表示名詞興趣，所以不能用not，故not改成no。

第三處：這里需要一個(gè)形容詞來修飾pronunciation，而terribly是副詞，所以不行。故terribly改成terrible。

第四處：這里表示一年半的時(shí)間，而year是可數(shù)名詞，所以要用復(fù)數(shù)。故year改成years。

第五處：這里其實(shí)是一個(gè)賓語從句，只不過省略了that，所以后面應(yīng)該跟一個(gè)完整的句子，這里缺少謂語動(dòng)詞，又根據(jù)句意可知缺少的是be，主語是English故加上is。

第六處：這里用了always,而且后面都開始用一般現(xiàn)在時(shí)，所以這里不能用過去時(shí)了，故would改成will。
第七處: "if you try to ,you can be No.1” 此句應(yīng)刪去to，因?yàn)閲L試做什么為try to do sth ，習(xí)慣上可以省略 to do sth，故刪去to。
第八處：這里前后兩部分并沒有轉(zhuǎn)折的意思，所以用but不恰當(dāng)。故可以改成and。

第九處:sometimes表示有時(shí)候它后面已經(jīng)不能再加時(shí)間狀語了，因?yàn)楹竺嬗辛?/span>in the future所以這里應(yīng)該表示未來的某個(gè)時(shí)間，故sometimes改成sometime。

第十處：這里其實(shí)是一個(gè)定語從句，它修飾的是前面的photo，因?yàn)槟菑堈掌�是我們過去照的，所以用過去時(shí)，故take改成took。