Question

假設(shè)你是新華中學(xué)的學(xué)生李華，高中畢業(yè)后想到美國(guó)弗吉尼亞大學(xué)(University of Virginia)計(jì)算機(jī)專業(yè)深造，請(qǐng)根據(jù)以下提示用英語(yǔ)寫一封入學(xué)申請(qǐng)：

1．性別，年齡，畢業(yè)學(xué)校；   2．學(xué)習(xí)情況及特長(zhǎng)；

3．申請(qǐng)入學(xué)的理由；        4．聯(lián)系方式：lihua93@ yahoo. com

注意：1．詞數(shù)：120～150；       2．可適當(dāng)增加細(xì)節(jié)，以使行文連貫；

3．開頭和結(jié)尾已為你寫好，不計(jì)人總詞數(shù)。

Dear Sir or Madam,

                                                                               

                                                                              

                                                                              

                                                                              

                                                                              

                                                                              

I look forward to your prompt reply.

Yours sincerely,

Li Hua

 

Answer 1

【答案】

Dear Sir or Madam.

I’m writing to you in the hope that I would have the chance to further my studies at your university.

First, please allow me to briefly introduce myself. My name is Li Hua, born in 1993. I’ll graduate from Xinhua High School this coming June. I’m an all-round student with excellent grades in all subjects, in particular Internet, Technology and English. This is the reason why I want to major in Computer Science in an English speaking country. I’m also good at computer program design and basketball.

I know that the University of Virginia ranks among the top universities in the USA and enjoy a good reputation all around the world. It would be a great honor for me to study at your university.

My e-mail address is lihua93@ yahoo. com, and I’ll appreciate it very much if I can receive your reply!

Sincerely yours

Li Hua

【解析】

試題分析：本文寫作首先對(duì)自己的姓名，出生，畢業(yè)學(xué)校等相關(guān)的信息進(jìn)行介紹My name is Li Hua, born in 1993. I’ll graduate from Xinhua High School this coming June.然后對(duì)學(xué)習(xí)情況及特長(zhǎng)進(jìn)行說(shuō)明，可以說(shuō)自己是一個(gè)全面發(fā)展的學(xué)生all-round student，特別是在計(jì)算機(jī)，英語(yǔ)方面成績(jī)很優(yōu)秀in particular Internet ,Technology and English.再對(duì)申請(qǐng)入學(xué)的理由進(jìn)行闡述，可以將自己的特長(zhǎng)和申請(qǐng)入學(xué)的理由結(jié)合起來(lái)寫，運(yùn)用This is the reason why的句型來(lái)自然的過(guò)度。最后適當(dāng)贊美一下這所大學(xué)，有助于給別人留下好的印象，表達(dá)自己對(duì)這所大學(xué)的向往It would be a great honor for me to study at your university.

考點(diǎn)：提綱類寫作

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