10．假如英語課上老師要求同桌之間交換修改作文，請你修改你同桌的以下作文．文中共有10處錯誤，每句中最多有兩處．錯誤涉及單詞的增加、刪除或修改．
增加：在缺詞處加一個漏詞符號∧，并在此符號下面寫出該加的詞．
刪除：把多余的詞用斜線\劃掉．
修改：在錯詞下面劃一橫線，并在該詞下面寫出修改后的詞．
注意：1）每處錯誤及其修改均僅限一詞；
2）只允許修改10處，多者從第11處不計分

I like travelling and my dream of paying a visit for Beijing，the capital city of our country，come true during the National Day holidays this year．On October 1st，I went to Tian'anmen Square with my parents，there we watched the flag-raising ceremony．As I watched the flag rising slowly，I sang a national anthem，feel extremely excited．Then we went to some other famous tourist attraction，like the Great Wall．Standing on the Great Wall，I felt very proudly．I thought the old saying that"He who do not reach the Great Wall is not a true man．"Although I was tired，but I really had a good time．

分析 本文主要講述作者參觀北京的夢想實現(xiàn)了．作者和父母今年10月1日去了天安門廣場，觀看了升國旗，唱了國歌，感到興奮．隨后去了其它的景點(diǎn)，雖然很累，但玩得很高興．

解答 I like travelling and my dream of paying a visit for Beijing，the capital city of our country，come true during the National Day holidays this year．On October 1st，I went to Tian'anmen Square with my parents，there we watched the flag-raising ceremony．As I watched the flag rising slowly，I sang a national anthem，feel extremely excited．Then we went to some other famous tourist attraction，like the Great Wall．Standing on the Great Wall，I felt very proudly．I thought∧the old saying that"He who do not reach the Great Wall is not a true man．"Although I was tired，but I really had a good time．
詳解：
1．for改為to 考查固定搭配．pay a visit to意為"去參觀，拜訪"，是固定搭配．
2．come改為came 考查動詞時態(tài)．根據(jù)句意，事情已經(jīng)發(fā)生，要用一般過去時態(tài)．
3．there改為where 考查定語從句．分析句子結(jié)構(gòu)可知這是一個定語從句，先行詞Tian'anmen Square表示地點(diǎn)，用關(guān)系副詞where．
4．a(chǎn)改為the 考查冠詞．國旗，國歌表示特指，其前要加定冠詞the．
5．feel改為feeling 考查現(xiàn)在分詞．feel前缺少連詞，I與feel之間是主動關(guān)系，用現(xiàn)在分詞作狀語表示伴隨．
6．a(chǎn)ttraction改為attractions 考查名詞復(fù)數(shù)．a(chǎn)ttraction意為"吸引游客的事物（或地方）"，是可數(shù)名詞，其前有some修飾，要用復(fù)數(shù)形式．
7．proudly改為proud 考查形容詞．feel意為"感覺"，此處是連系動詞，后接形容詞作表語．副詞proudly的形容詞是proud．
8．加of  考查固定搭配．根據(jù)句意，應(yīng)是"想起"，think of意為"想起，記起"．think意為"認(rèn)為，以為"．
9．do改為does 考查主謂一致．在定語從句中，從句的謂語動詞與先行詞一致，先行詞he是單數(shù)三人稱，助動詞用does．
10．去掉but 考查連詞．在英語中，兩個單句用一個連詞，句中已有連詞although，but是多余的，要去掉．

點(diǎn)評 高考短文改錯題的形式有說明文，短文故事，書信等，具有很強(qiáng)的實用性．短文的內(nèi)容和語言都符合高中學(xué)生的實際，從表面上看類似一篇學(xué)生習(xí)作．首先，通讀全文，了解短文大意，把握全篇的時態(tài)、人稱及行文邏輯，在通讀全文時把一些容易的錯誤先改好，再進(jìn)行逐句改錯．其次，要進(jìn)行逐個句子的改錯．這是要對文中的詞法、句法和語篇著重分析和特別注意．最后把改好的短文再閱讀一遍，檢查答案是否正確，感覺是否還有不妥之處，最終形成定稿．

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Secondly，noise．Enjoy yourselves by all means，but please don't make unnecessary noise，especially at night．We ask you to respect other people who may wish to be quiet．
Thirdly，crossing the road．Be careful！The traffic moves on the left side of the road in this country．Use pedestrian crossings （人行橫道） and do not take any chances when crossing the road．
My next point is about litter （throwing away waste material in a public place）．It is
an offense （違法行為） to drop litter in the street．When you have something to throw
away，please put it in your pocket and take it home，or put it in a litter bin．
Finally，it is against the law to buy cigarettes or tobacco （煙草） if you are under
16years old．
I'd like to finish by saying that if you require any sort of help or assistance，you
should contact your local police station，who will be pleased to help you．
Now，are there any questions？

25．The main purpose of this speech would be toB．
A．a(chǎn)ttract more people to travel in England
B．give advice to travellers to the country
C．prepare people for international travel
D．inform people of the punishment for breaking laws
26．How many laws are there discussed in the speech？D
A．Three 
B．Six 
C．Four 
D．Five
27．From the speech we learn thatD．
A．in this country，if you are under 18years old，you may not buy alcohol，but your friend can buy it for you
B．because the traffic moves on the right of the road，you must use pedestrian crossing when crossing the road
C．you can't make noise except at night
D．you may not buy cigarettes or tobacco unless you are over 16years old．
28．Who should you contact if you need help？C
A．The police station of England 
B．Your guide
C．Your local police station 
D．Your hotel．

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20．Shi Fang spends more than 4，000 yuan a month shopping，but she rarely goes to the shopping mall．"Why need a shopping mall if you have Taobao？I am a Taobaoer，"says Shi，28，a writer in Beijing．
A growing number of Chinese Internet users like Shi have discovered the joys of online shopping．The China Internet Network Information Center （CNNIC） announced in December that more than 87 million Chinese made purchases on the Internet in the first half year，which means one out of four Chinese netizens have online shopping experience．
It is estimated that the consumption from online shopping will reach more than 250 billion yuan this year，and 80 percent of this is carried out through Taobao．com，China's fast-growing e-commerce hub （樞紐） set up in 2003．
The biggest attraction for Shi Fang is the relatively low price for online goods，compared with those in stores in bricks．Her favorite facial cream costs 1，680 yuan for a 30ml bottle in the local shop，but a 10ml sample of the same brand only costs 68 yuan online．
The Taobao instant messenger，a communication channel for buyers and sellers，also makes onlrne shopping easier and ensures the overall experience for both parties Shi Fang regards it as a platform to promote trust and keep contact．
"You can check the information easily．It is sweet that the owner will remember you once you have regular chat with him or her through the messenger．You may receive some personalized service such as getting more samples or certain discount，"said Shi While some may question the security of online purchases，Yang Fei，another Taobaoer，gave a thumb-up for Alipay，the Taobao payment method started by Alibaba Group in 2004 in partnership with leading banks in China．It enabled her to make a lot of purchases online．
"It's very safe and convenient．Unless you confirm the arrival and satisfaction about the purchase，the shop owner will not get the money．You can also get the refund（退款） if you want to return the purchase，"she added．

67．According to the passage，Taobao isA．
    A．a(chǎn) website where people can buy different things
    B．a(chǎn)n Internet store where we can buy whatever we want
    C．a(chǎn) website where people can make friends all over the country
    D．a(chǎn) messenger through which people can bargain with each other
68．Which of the following is NOT the advantage of shopping online？C
    A．Personalized service．               B．Reasonable price．
    C．Rich experience．                    D．Its convenience．
69．It can be inferred from the passage thatA．
    A．the consumption through Taobao．corn may be over 200 billion yuan this year
    B．consumers won't get any samples because of the low prices
    C．consumers can communicate with sellers mainly on the phone
    D．one fourth of Chinese citizens have online shopping experience
70．Which of the following would be the best title？D
    A．The Taobao Messenger
    B．Online Shopping Process
    C．An Online Shopping Experience
    D．A Booming Online Shopping Hub．

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