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2．假設(shè)你是晨光中學(xué)的高中生李華．你校擬選拔一批優(yōu)秀學(xué)生，利用暑期到晨曦希望小學(xué)為學(xué)生輔導(dǎo)英語．你希望參加此活動(dòng)．請(qǐng)根據(jù)以下提示，用英語給校評(píng)選組寫一封申請(qǐng)信：
●對(duì)此活動(dòng)的認(rèn)識(shí)（如對(duì)本人、學(xué)生級(jí)社會(huì)的益處等）
●個(gè)人優(yōu)勢(shì)（如性格、獨(dú)立生活能力、語言能力等）
●你的計(jì)劃（如怎樣進(jìn)行輔導(dǎo)等）
注意：
1．詞數(shù)不少于100；
2．可適當(dāng)加入細(xì)節(jié)，以使內(nèi)容充實(shí)、行文連貫；
3．信的開頭和結(jié)尾已給出，不計(jì)入詞數(shù)．
參考詞匯：
晨曦希望小學(xué) Chenxi Hope School
Dear Sir or Madam，
I am Li Hua from Class One，Senior Two．As far as I am concerned，I believe to teach English for pupils from Chenxi Hope School will be good for both the primary-school students and high-school student tutors，which thus will result in substantial social benefits．
I think I am qualified for being the pupils'English coach，because I have good character，and I'm independent in life and proficient in English．That's why I apply for the position．I hope I can join the instructive activity．
My plan for coaching the pupils is to teach them by listening，speaking，reading and writing．What's more important is to stimulate their interests in learning English as a foreign language，creating a good learning environment．I hope you can offer the opportunity．

Yours Sincerely，
Li Hua．

Answer 1

分析 本文是書信類作文，根據(jù)所給要點(diǎn)內(nèi)容給學(xué)校寫一封申請(qǐng)信，申請(qǐng)用暑期到晨曦希望小學(xué)為學(xué)生輔導(dǎo)英語．屬于提綱作文．時(shí)態(tài)為一般現(xiàn)在時(shí)．人稱以第一人稱為主．重要短語：As far as I am concerned （據(jù)我所知），result in （導(dǎo)致），be qualified for （有資格，合格），be independent （獨(dú)立），instructive（有教育意義），stimulate interests in（激發(fā)…的興趣）．

解答 Dear Sir or Madam，
I am Li Hua from Class One，Senior Two．As far as I am concerned，I believe to teach English for pupils from Chenxi Hope School will be good for both the primary-school students and high-school student tutors，which thus will result in substantial social benefits．【高分句型】（對(duì)活動(dòng)的認(rèn)識(shí)）
I think I am qualified for being the pupils'English coach，because I have good character，and I'm independent in life and proficient in English．That's why I apply for the position．I hope I can join the instructive activity．【高分句型】（個(gè)人優(yōu)勢(shì)）
My plan for coaching the pupils is to teach them by listening，speaking，reading and writing．What's more important is to stimulate their interests in learning English as a foreign language，creating a good learning environment．【高分句型】I hope you can offer the opportunity．（計(jì)劃）
Yours sincerely，
 Li Hua

點(diǎn)評(píng) 寫好提綱式作文的關(guān)鍵是認(rèn)真審題和分析所給的提綱，并充分發(fā)揮自己的想象力，靈活運(yùn)用英語知識(shí)，采用不同的表達(dá)方式將要點(diǎn)完整地表述出來，注意主次分明，詳略得當(dāng)．語言力求準(zhǔn)確、簡(jiǎn)潔．應(yīng)選用合適的連接詞或過渡詞，使文章具有一定的連貫性．最后還要認(rèn)真查驗(yàn)是否有漏寫情況，有無拼寫錯(cuò)誤及標(biāo)點(diǎn)誤用等．