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4．Life is just like a mirror，you smile at it，and it smiles at you，too．請(qǐng)你以"Learn to Smile"為題，寫一篇100詞左右的文章，要點(diǎn)包括：
1．學(xué)會(huì)對(duì)自己微笑；             
2．學(xué)會(huì)對(duì)別人微笑；          
3．微笑的重要性．
注意：短文必須包括所有內(nèi)容要點(diǎn)，不要逐字翻譯，可適當(dāng)發(fā)揮，使短文連貫通順．

Answer 1

分析 本文是一篇提綱作文．根據(jù)所提供的材料信息，以"Learnto smile"為題寫一篇短文，又屬于命題作文．
寫作要點(diǎn)包括：1．學(xué)會(huì)對(duì)自己微笑； 2．學(xué)會(huì)對(duì)別人微笑； 3．微笑的重要性．
寫作時(shí)應(yīng)以一般現(xiàn)在時(shí)為主．人稱以第一和第二人稱為主．
重要短語：learn to smile （學(xué)會(huì)微笑），fail an exam （考試不及格），be misunderstood by （被…誤解），bring back …（帶回來，拿回，帶回…），beat sb （打敗某人，戰(zhàn)勝某人），keep sb healthy（使某人保持健康…），as well （和，又，也），in a word （總之），belong to（屬于），shorten the distance between A and B（縮短A到B的距離）．
【高分句型】：
1．Smiling at yourself brings back your confidence．
此處是動(dòng)名詞短語作主語，謂語動(dòng)詞用單數(shù)．
2．Sometimes the one ①who beats you is ②not others，but yourself．
①此處是由who引導(dǎo)的定語從句，關(guān)系代詞who在從句中作主語；
②此處是由"not…but…"引導(dǎo)的結(jié)構(gòu)作表語．
3．smile is a kind of language belonging to everyone．
此處是由現(xiàn)在分詞短語"belonging to"作名詞language的后置定語，可以理解為"smile is a kind of language which belongs to everyone"．
4．Living with a smile，every day will be shiny．
此處是由現(xiàn)在分詞短語"Living with a smile"作伴隨狀語．

解答 Learn to smile
I remember a song by Westlife，the first sentence of it is"Just a smile and the rain is gone．"Do you like smiling？I think you should learn tosmile．（開頭引出話題）
First，learn to smile at yourself when something unpleasant happens in yourlife．If you fail an exam or you are misunderstood by your friends，don't be sad．Just smile at yourself．Smiling at yourself bringsback your confidence．【高分句型】Sometimes the one who beatsyou is not others，but yourself．【高分句型】And smile can also keep youhealthy．（學(xué)會(huì)對(duì)自己微笑）
Second，learn to smile at others．It will make you communicate better with people．Smiling at others makesyourself happy as well．（學(xué)會(huì)對(duì)他人微笑）
 In a word，smile is a kind of languagebelonging to everyone．【高分句型】It passes love andfriendship and helps shorten the distance between you and other people．Living with a smile，every day will be shiny．【高分句型】（微笑的重要性）

點(diǎn)評(píng) 提綱作文在寫作時(shí)要注意內(nèi)容是否包含了所有要點(diǎn)．寫作時(shí)注意準(zhǔn)確運(yùn)用時(shí)態(tài)，上下文意思連貫，符合邏輯關(guān)系，盡量使用自己熟悉的單詞句式，同時(shí)也要注意使用高級(jí)詞匯和高級(jí)句型使文章顯得更有檔次，平時(shí)需注意積累短語和重要句型．