假如你是李華,學(xué)校組織了一項(xiàng)“有煩惱向誰(shuí)說(shuō)”的調(diào)查活動(dòng)。請(qǐng)根據(jù)調(diào)查結(jié)果用英語(yǔ)給校報(bào)編輯寫一封信,反映相關(guān)的情況。并闡述你自己的看法。
Dear editor,
Recently our school has carried out a survey—to whom do you go when you are in trouble? The results are as follows:____________________________________________________________________
___________________________________________________________________________
___________________________________________________________________________
___________________________________________________________________________
___________________________________________________________________________
Yours ,
Lihua
Dear editor,
Recently our school has carried out a survey--to whom do you go when in trouble? The results are as follows:
61% of the students surveyed select friends or schoolmates as their ideal listeners when they have trouble. The
reason for it is that they are in the same age group and have a better understanding of each other. 22% choose
teachers and parents to talk to for the reason that teachers and parents are rich in life and educational experiences.
However, there are also 17% who don’t share their troubles at all. They say that their troubles are none of other’s
business and some of them find it hard to get along with others.
As for me, I prefer to deal with my troubles by myself first. When I am faced with troubles, seeking for various
ways to settle is my first step. Because sometimes troubles are not so troublesome or challenging as we expected,
they can be solved entirely with my efforts. I do like to experience the pleasure. Of course, sometimes I will also
turn to my parents or friends for help if the troubles are not within my ability.
Yours
Lihua
【解析】
試題分析:題目要求就一項(xiàng)調(diào)查活動(dòng)的結(jié)果向校報(bào)編輯寫一封信。寫作要點(diǎn)以餅圖的形式呈現(xiàn),選擇向同學(xué)、朋友說(shuō)的占大多數(shù),其次是向老師、父母說(shuō),少數(shù)選擇不向別人說(shuō)。作文可以分為兩部分,一部分描述調(diào)查的結(jié)果;第二部分?jǐn)⑹鲎约旱挠^點(diǎn)。寫作時(shí)注意前后文的銜接,對(duì)調(diào)查結(jié)果的描述盡量客觀。
【亮點(diǎn)說(shuō)明】范文使用了carried out, in trouble, select...as, talk to, are rich in, get along with, As for, deal with, by myself, turn to for help等短語(yǔ),基礎(chǔ)知識(shí)掌握扎實(shí),作文內(nèi)容充實(shí);范文使用了表語(yǔ)從句that they are in the same age group;定語(yǔ)從句who don’t share their troubles at all;固定句型 find it hard to do sth;固定搭配be faced with;固定句型so... as we expected;固定搭配prefer to等,語(yǔ)法知識(shí)掌握牢固;范文還使用了However, Of course等連接上下文,做到了語(yǔ)意連貫;范文使用I do like...,用do來(lái)強(qiáng)調(diào),加強(qiáng)語(yǔ)氣。
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