Question

12．假如你是普寧市勤建中學(xué)學(xué)生李華，你的美國筆友約翰來信詢問雅安地震情況，并表達(dá)了要去災(zāi)區(qū)當(dāng)志愿者的愿望．請(qǐng)你回信，內(nèi)容主要包括：
1．傷亡情況：死約200人，傷逾萬人．
2．救援人員：軍隊(duì)，當(dāng)?shù)卣�府及民眾�?br />3．婉言勸止并說明理由．
注意：1．詞數(shù)100左右．
2．可適當(dāng)增加細(xì)節(jié)，以使行文連貫．
3．相關(guān)詞匯：rescue 救援   the trapped 被困人員
Dear John，
Thank you very much for your concern over the earthquake in Ya'an，Sichuan Province．
                                                                            
                                                           Yours
                                                           Li Hua．

Answer 1

分析 考查應(yīng)用文中的書信的寫作．你的美國筆友約翰來信詢問雅安地震情況，并表達(dá)了要去災(zāi)區(qū)當(dāng)志愿者的愿望．請(qǐng)你回信．要點(diǎn)都已經(jīng)給出，審題時(shí)注意本文使用一般過去時(shí)和一般現(xiàn)在時(shí)，描述要盡量選擇簡(jiǎn)潔的語言，運(yùn)用合適的語法規(guī)則和詞匯把各要點(diǎn)都準(zhǔn)確表述出．難點(diǎn)在于選擇詞匯和句型，可以靈活運(yùn)用高級(jí)詞匯和固定短語準(zhǔn)確表述．
【亮點(diǎn)說明】本文結(jié)構(gòu)緊湊，層次分明，而且使用了多種表達(dá)：范文的I don't think it's a good idea for you to come．和 you will find it hard to communicate with people there，都使用了it，還要用適當(dāng)?shù)倪B接詞被句子連接起來，象As far as I know，after all，besides等詞，這樣文章顯得更連貫． 
As far as I know，about two hundred people were killed and more than ten thousand injured in the earthquake．（高分句型一）
Together with the local people，they are making every effort to search for the trapped and send the injured to hospitals．（高分句型二）

解答 Dear John，
       Thank you very muncern over the earthquake in Ya'an，Sichuan Province．Now I'm writing to tell you something about it．
       As far as I know，about two hundred people were killed and more than ten thousand injured in the earthquake．（高分句型一） The army was soon sent to join the local government in the rescue．Together with the local people，they are making every effort to search for the trapped and send the injured to hospitals．（高分句型二）    
       I know you are dying to help out．But personally，I don't think it's a good idea for you to come．You know，danger still exists．Besides，you will find it hard to communicate with people there．After all，you speak a different language．
       Anyway，thank you for your offer and I will keep you informed of the situation．
                                                                                                                                                                                                    Yours，
                                                                                                                                                                                                    Li Hua．

點(diǎn)評(píng) 英語寫作是一項(xiàng)主觀性較強(qiáng)的測(cè)試題．它不僅考查學(xué)生的寫作基礎(chǔ)而且還考查學(xué)生在寫作過程中綜合運(yùn)用語言的能力．在撰寫時(shí)要注意主謂語一致，時(shí)態(tài)呼應(yīng)，用詞貼切等．要提高英語寫作水平，需要兩方面的訓(xùn)練：一是語言基礎(chǔ)方面的訓(xùn)練，要有扎實(shí)的造句、翻譯等基本功，即用詞法、句法等知識(shí)造出正確無誤的句子；二是寫作知識(shí)和能力 方面的訓(xùn)練以掌握寫作方面的基本方法和技巧．