Question

請根據下面提供的內容寫一篇人物簡介
【寫作要求】
1. 只能使用5個句子表達全部內容。2. 作文中不能出現(xiàn)真實姓名和班級。
【評分標準】
句子結構準確，信息內容完整，篇章結構連貫。
【參考詞匯】法國公開賽：French Open女單冠軍: singles title大滿貫：Grand Slam

人物簡介	李娜，1982年2月26日出生，從小就對運動有天賦，6歲開始練習羽毛球，9歲轉學網球；
主要經歷及獲得榮譽	1.  2002年：離開網球場，到大學讀書；兩年后重返球場； 2. 在包括她丈夫在內的幾位著名教練的指導下，進步神速； 3.  2011年：法國公開賽女子單打冠軍，第一位獲得大滿貫賽事單打冠軍的亞洲網球選手；

Answer 1

Born on Feb 26, 1982, Li Na has a gift for sports from her childhood. She began to practice badminton at the age of six and was introduced to play tennis when she was nine. In 2002 she took a break from tennis to study at university, but two years later she returned. With the help /(Under the guidance ) of some famous coaches, including her husband /Following the instructions of several famous coaches, she has been making greater and greater achievements/ progress/ improvement(s) rapidly. As a result she won the 2011 French Open singles title, becoming the first player from Asia to win a Grand Slam in singles.

試題分析：這是提綱類短文，根據要點簡單介紹李娜的基本情況。文章的要點基本上都給了出來，考生只需要翻譯即可，難度不大，在寫作的時候也不能逐字逐句的翻譯，要運用合適的連接詞把要點串聯(lián)起來，形成一個整體。選擇詞匯的時候要選擇相對高級的詞匯，也要運用多種句型，讓文章更有變化。如：In 2002 she took a break from tennis to study at university, but two years later she returned.及. As a result she won the 2011 French Open singles title, becoming the first player from Asia to win a Grand Slam in singles.都是很好的句式。
點評：提綱類作文的關鍵在于表達方式的選擇和要點的完備，不能有遺漏或者省略。但是一定要地道的英語表達法，在寫作的時候要變換句式，要寫得更為親切直白。不要過分堆砌。