Question

請(qǐng)根據(jù)以下提示，結(jié)合你生活中的一個(gè)事例，用英語(yǔ)寫(xiě)一篇短文。
Volunteers believe that the happiest people in the world are those who help to bring happiness to others.
注意：①無(wú)須寫(xiě)標(biāo)題；
②除詩(shī)歌外，文體不限；
③內(nèi)容必須結(jié)合你生活中的一個(gè)事例；
④文中不得透露個(gè)人姓名和學(xué)校名稱(chēng)；
⑤詞數(shù)不少于120，如引用提示語(yǔ)則不計(jì)入總詞數(shù)。

Answer 1

In recent years, the volunteering spirit has spread among the Chinese people, especially among youngsters.
Five years ago, several of my classmates and I once served as volunteers for the Beijing Olympic Games. In that period of time, I helped arrange for the sports courts, translate for foreign athletes and visitors, and sometimes guide them to right places. It delighted me a lot that I had made a contribution to the success of the Games and brought happiness to others.
As high school students, we should get actively involved in voluntary activities. In this way, we can learn how to work well in a team, how to improve our interpersonal skills and organizational ability. Above all, we can benefit others and gain happiness ourselves. So we should take this chance to learn and to grow.

試題分析：考查開(kāi)放性作文寫(xiě)作,開(kāi)放性作文給出了一個(gè)話(huà)題，并有部分的文字提示。給考生自由發(fā)揮的余地較大。對(duì)于考生的綜合能力要求較高，要求考生有很強(qiáng)的謀篇布局的能力和組織要點(diǎn)的能力。在完成開(kāi)放性作文時(shí)，首先要選擇自己熟悉的短語(yǔ)或者句型，在你的能力范圍之內(nèi)，選擇句式時(shí)要賦予變化，因?yàn)檫@樣你才可以更好的駕馭。同時(shí)也要選擇合適的連接詞，把各個(gè)要點(diǎn)組織成一個(gè)完整的整體，如besides, further, last but not least等。在發(fā)表個(gè)人觀(guān)點(diǎn)的時(shí)候，可以使用諺語(yǔ)來(lái)提升整個(gè)文章的檔次和文采，也能增加得高分的可能性。
【亮點(diǎn)說(shuō)明】文章使用了很好的短語(yǔ)和句子： served as擔(dān)當(dāng)， arrange for安排，get actively involved in積極的參與，Above all更重要的是, It delighted me a lot that I had made a contribution to the success of the Games and brought happiness to others.這句話(huà)用了形式主語(yǔ)， In this way, we can learn how to work well in a team, how to improve our interpersonal skills and organizational ability. 這句話(huà)用了疑問(wèn)詞+不定式的用法。