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6．此題要求改正所給短文中的錯誤，對標有題號的每一行作出判斷；如無錯誤，在該行右邊橫線上畫一個（√）；如有錯誤（每行只有一個錯誤），則按下列情況改正：
    此行多一詞：把多余的詞用斜線（\）劃掉，在該行右邊橫線上寫出該詞，并也用斜線劃掉．
    此行缺一詞：在缺詞處加一個漏字符號（∧），在該行右邊橫線上寫出該加的詞．
此行錯一詞：在錯的詞下劃一橫線，在該行右邊橫線上寫出改正后的詞．
注意：原行沒有錯的請不要改．
Mr．Hill was a chicken farmer where had hundreds of chickens.76．where→who
He sold eggs and got quite a lot of money，so he lived in a very hot        77．so→but
part of the country．He found his hen laid hardly any eggs in   summer，78．hen→hens
and then he decided to put his air conditioner into his chicken house        79．√
so that his hens would lay well all through year．The boss of   the air        80．在year前面加the
conditioning company came to see her one day．He thought that he            81．her→him
might be able to persuade him to buy for an air conditioner when he             82．去掉for
saw Mr．Hill's house，"Your wife would be more happier and more              83．happy→happier
comfortable then，"he said to Mr．Hill．But Mr．Hill was not interesting.84．interesting→interested
"My wife didn't lay eggs，"Mr．Hill said.85．didn't→doesn't．

Answer 1

分析 文章大意：本文是一則笑話．Mr Hill是養(yǎng)雞的，賣雞蛋賺了很多錢，但是他居住的地方炎熱，為了讓雞下更多的蛋，他想給雞舍里安裝空調(diào)．空調(diào)老板過來查看，他想說服Mr Hill給她的妻子安裝空調(diào)，Mr Hill回答說："我的妻子又不生蛋．"

解答 Mr．Hill was a chicken farmerwherehad hundreds of chickens．
                                             who
He sold eggs and got quite a lot of money，so he lived in a very hot  
                                                              but
  part of the country．He found his hen laid hardly any eggs in   summer，
                                                   hens
and then he decided to put his air conditioner into his chicken house       
   
so that his hens would lay well all through∧year．The boss of   the air     
                                                             the
conditioning company came to see herone day．He thought that he       
                                                  him
might be able to persuade him to buy for an air conditioner when he        
                                                      去掉
saw Mr．Hill's house，"Your wife would be more happier and more       
                                                                去掉
comfortable then，"he said to Mr．Hill．But Mr．Hill was not interesting．
                                                                                              interested
"My wife didn'tlay eggs，"Mr．Hill said．．
               doesn't
76．where→who．考查定語從句． 先行詞是人，定語從句who had hundreds of chickens修飾farmer．
77．so→but．考查連詞．此處前后之間是轉(zhuǎn)折關系，所以用but．
78．hen→hens．考查名詞單復數(shù)．根據(jù)句子后半部分中的his hens would lay well可知此處用hens．
79．√．
80．在year前面加the．考查冠詞．a(chǎn)ll through the year是固定表達，表示"全年，一年四季"．
81．her→him．考查人稱代詞．此處指空調(diào)公司的老板來看Mr Hill，所以用him．
82．去掉for．buy是及物動詞，直接跟要買的東西，所以去掉for．
83．去掉more．考查比較級．此處用形容詞的比較級不與more連用．
84．interesting→interested．考查形容詞．interesting有趣的，令人感到有趣的； interested感到有趣的．表示"某人感興趣"，用sb．be interested．
85．didn't→doesn't．考查時態(tài)．此處是直接引語，表示客觀事實，所以用一般現(xiàn)在時．

點評 改錯題要注意代詞，連詞以及詞性、人稱的轉(zhuǎn)化．
做好短文改錯題，可以從以下三方面去考慮：1．快速閱讀短文，如抓住中心思想，從整體上對短文有個了解． 2．充分運用語言的基礎知識，從句型結(jié)構、詞的變化、詞類選擇、詞的搭配、習慣用法出發(fā)，進行分析判斷，盡快找出錯誤在何處． 3．重視整體和語境，從上下文關系中找出表達連接關系或邏輯關系的詞或詞組，判斷是遞進關系還是轉(zhuǎn)折關系，是因果關系還是讓步關系．