Question

5．一家英語報(bào)社向中學(xué)生征文，主題是"十年后的我"、請根據(jù)下列要求和你的想象完成短文
（1）家庭
（2）工作
（3）業(yè)余生活
注意：
（1）字?jǐn)?shù)100左右；  
（2）可以適當(dāng)增加細(xì)節(jié)，以使行文連貫；  
（3）開頭語已為你寫好
I often imagine what my life will be like in the future．I think my life will be very different in ten years．I will be twenty-eight years old by then．I will have my own family，probably with a lovely child．I hope I'll work in a computer company as a program designer．I'll enjoy my work and get along well with my colleagues．I'll do a good job in whatever I do．In my free time，I'll continue to take regular exercise，such as swimming，running and various ball games．On my holidays，I'll travel around the world．In a word，my life will be much richer and more colorful．．

Answer 1

分析 本文是應(yīng)用文，根據(jù)所給要點(diǎn)給英語報(bào)社寫一篇征文，主題是"十年后的我"，寫作要點(diǎn)：（1）家庭（2）工作（3）業(yè)余生活．屬提綱作文．在寫作時人稱以第一人稱為主．時態(tài)以一般將來時為主．重要短語：What is sb/sth like？（某人/物怎么樣…），get along well with（與…相處融洽），in one's free time（在某人空閑時間），take regular exercise（有規(guī)律地鍛煉），around the world（全世界），in a word（總之），continue to do sth（繼續(xù)做某事）．

解答 I often imagine what my life will be like in the future．I think my life will be very different in ten years．I will be twenty-eight years old by then．I will have my own family，probably with a lovely child．（家庭）I hope I'll work in a computer company as a program designer．I'll enjoy my work and get along well with my colleagues．I'll do a good job in whatever I do．【高分句型】（工作）In my free time，I'll continue to take regular exercise，such as swimming，running and various ball games．On my holidays，I'll travel around the world．In a word，my life will be much richer and more colorful．（業(yè)余生活）

點(diǎn)評 提綱作文在寫作時要注意內(nèi)容是否包含了所有要點(diǎn)．寫作時注意準(zhǔn)確運(yùn)用時態(tài)，上下文意思連貫，符合邏輯關(guān)系，盡量使用自己熟悉的單詞句式，同時也要注意使用高級詞匯和高級句型使文章顯得更有檔次，平時需注意積累短語和重要句型．