Question

內容：勞動節(jié)即將來臨，我們將放三天假。有人打算去旅游，有人準備待在家里。請為你自己制定一份節(jié)日計劃，并談談你的理由。
要求：1. 有明確的計劃和相應的理由
2. 字數(shù)：100左右。
3. 開頭句已寫好，不計入字數(shù)。

Labor Day is coming and we’ll have three days off.

Answer 1

Labor Day is coming and we’ll have three days off. It’s great. Personally, I think it will be a wonderful holiday. Recently, we have been busy preparing the mid-term exam, which has really got us tired out. So I’d like to have a good rest at home, reading some interesting books for fun and having enough sleep. Also, during the holiday, the weather must be fine, neither too hot nor too cold. It’s the right season for an outing. I can’t wait to enjoy the beauty of nature with my family or friends. Of course, as a senior middle school student, there’s no doubt that I should attach great importance to my study. I decide to make use of the last day of the holiday to think about my new study plan and do my homework.

試題分析：這篇作文是半開放式作文，因為通過題目要求，只知道為你自己制定一份節(jié)日計劃，并談談你的理由。所以應該分兩個內容，計劃和理由，而且具體的內容要考生結合自己的實際情況去表達，重點是盡量使用自己熟悉的單詞句式，同時也要注意使用高級詞匯和高級句型使文章顯得更有檔次。寫作時注意準確運用時態(tài)，上下文意思連貫，符合邏輯關系。
【亮點說明】這篇范文最大的特點是短語和句式多變：have…. Off放幾天假，neither … nor…既不，也不， can’t wait to迫不及待的， attach great importance to重視， make use of 利用，Recently, we have been busy preparing the mid-term exam, which has really got us tired out. 這句話用了非限制性定語從句，So I’d like to have a good rest at home, reading some interesting books for fun and having enough sleep. 這句話用了現(xiàn)在分詞做狀語， Of course, as a senior middle school student, there’s no doubt that I should attach great importance to my study. 這句話用了固定句型。