Question

目前，不少人在寫作與交流中喜歡使用網(wǎng)絡(luò)語言， 有時講漢語時還夾雜著英語，如PK等。就此現(xiàn)象，你班最近舉行了一場討論。請根據(jù)下表的提示，客觀的介紹討論情況及你的觀點。

40%的同學(xué)認(rèn)為	60%的同學(xué)認(rèn)為	你的觀點
有點荒誕，有時讓人無法理解； 違背了漢語的語法規(guī)則，對學(xué)英語毫無幫助。	幽默，活潑，語言更具多樣性； 有助于表達思想。	？

注意：1．文章的起始句已給出。
2．詞數(shù)：120左右（不包括已給的起始句）。
3. 可根據(jù)內(nèi)容要點適當(dāng)增加細(xì)節(jié)，以使行文連貫。
4. 參考詞匯：荒誕 ridiculous
Nowadays, with the development of the Internet, there came a kind of language called Web Language.______________________________________________________________________
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Answer 1

Nowadays, with the development of the Internet, there came a kind of language called Web Language. Some people even speak Chinese mixed with English words. This is a phenomenon worth thinking about.
40% students think it kind of ridiculous. In their opinion, it makes no sense in helping people communicate or learn English. Besides, it is against the Chinese grammar rules. However, 60% students are fond of this way. They appreciate its humor. They think it of special help in expressing themselves. And it can make the language varied.
Personlaay, I don’t think it good to use this kind of language. It may be fashionable as some think, but you may also get your idea confusing, leaving other people at a loss as to yout meaning.

試題分析：本篇寫作題材是對使用網(wǎng)絡(luò)語言的兩種不同觀點。這種文章一般層次比較清晰，四段：第一段為總述；第二段反對的觀點及依據(jù)；第三段贊同的觀點及依據(jù)；第四段自己觀點。要注意的是1.在列舉雙方依據(jù)時要盡量使語言多樣化；2.自我觀點表達時要有正確的判斷，要有辯證的思維。一篇文章需要有正確的句子才能明了清晰的表達作者的意思�？忌鷳�(yīng)明白高考書面表達題既不是漢譯英，也不是可任意發(fā)揮的作文。它要求的是將所規(guī)定的材料內(nèi)容經(jīng)整理后展開思維，考查運用所學(xué)英語知識準(zhǔn)確地表達意思的能力。
點評：考生應(yīng)該用自己最熟悉、最有把握的詞、短語及句式，按一定的邏輯順序和意義層次完成短文，劃分好文章的自然段落，注意段落之間的發(fā)展和連貫。盡量使用不同長度的句子，使句型多樣化。適當(dāng)使用連詞，使句子間的銜接自然流暢。