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5．假如你是李明，最近你的朋友張華因考試不利情緒低落，喪失信心，學(xué)習(xí)消極應(yīng)付．請你用英語給他寫一封建議信，指出其消極行為可能帶來的不良后果，并結(jié)合自身實(shí)際提出應(yīng)采取的積極態(tài)度和應(yīng)對方法，鼓勵(lì)他努力學(xué)習(xí)．注意：1．詞數(shù)100左右；2．可以適當(dāng)增加細(xì)節(jié)，以使行文連貫；3．開頭和結(jié)尾已為你寫好，不計(jì)入總詞數(shù)．
Dear ZhangHua，
I'm sorry to hear that               ．

Answer 1

分析 本文是開放性作文，根據(jù)所給提示，給因考試不利情緒低落，喪失信心，學(xué)習(xí)消極應(yīng)付的張華寫一封建議信，指出其消極行為可能帶來的不良后果，并結(jié)合自身實(shí)際提出應(yīng)采取的積極態(tài)度和應(yīng)對方法，鼓勵(lì)他努力學(xué)習(xí)，又屬于提綱作文．
在寫作時(shí)以第一人稱和第二人稱為主，時(shí)態(tài)以一般現(xiàn)在時(shí)和一般過去時(shí)為主．
重要短語：do well in（做得好），try one's best（盡力做某事），end up with sth（以某事而結(jié)束），quite a number of（很多），tend to do（傾向于），lose one's confidence（失去信心），leave behind（落后），in the face of（面臨），calm down（鎮(zhèn)靜想，鎮(zhèn)定），reflect sth（反思某事），make changes（作變化），ask sb for advice（向某人尋求建議），stick to（堅(jiān)持人），make progress（取得進(jìn)步），step by step（一步一步的），be of some help to sb（對某人有幫助）．
【高分句型一】
1．You are not the only one who seems to try his or her best but ends up with a failure in exams．
此處是由關(guān)系代詞"who"引導(dǎo)的定語從句，先行詞為"the only one"，關(guān)系代詞"who"在定語從句中做主語．
【高分句型二】
2．I'm sure you know①that ②it's unwise to do so because you might be left far behind．
  ①此處是由"that"引導(dǎo)的賓語從句，主句為"I'm sure  you know"．
②此處是由形式主語"it"引導(dǎo)的主語從句，結(jié)構(gòu)為"It+be+形容詞+to do sth"
3．①what we need to do is②to calm down and reflect our learning methods and make some possible changes or ask the teachers for advice．
①此處是由疑問代詞"what"引導(dǎo)的主語從句，"what"在從句中作主語，謂語動(dòng)詞用單數(shù)．
②此處是由三個(gè)不定式"to do"作表語，"and"后面的是省略了"to"的動(dòng)詞不定式（表示并列關(guān)系的兩個(gè)或多個(gè)不定式可以省略"to"）．
【高分句型三】
3．If you have any question，please write to me．
此處是由"if"引導(dǎo)的賓語從句，主句為"please write to me"．
【高分句型四】
4．I firmly hope I can be of some help to you．
 此處是由省略了"that"的賓語從句，主句為"I firmly hope"．

解答 Dear Zhang Hua，
I'm sorry to hear that you didn't do well in your last exam．You are not the only one who seems to try his or her best but ends up with a failure in exams．【高分句型一】Quite a number of students feel the same way as you and they tend to lose their confidence （lose heart） and don't want to study hard any longer．I'm sure you know that it's unwise to do so because you might be left far behind．【高分句型二】（消極行為可能帶來的不良后果） 
 I was once in the same situation as yours．Failure is the mother of success．In the face of failure，what we need to do is to calm down and reflect our learning methods and make some possible changes or ask the teachers for advice．【高分句型三】Anyway，Rome was not built in a day．Only by sticking to studying persistently can we make progress step by step till success．【高分句型四】I firmly hope I can be of some help to you．（結(jié)合自身實(shí)際提出應(yīng)采取的積極態(tài)度和應(yīng)對方法）

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