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18．孩子的成長和教育是社會熱議的話題，現(xiàn)今父母包攬一切、孩子過度依賴等現(xiàn)象十分嚴(yán)重．請閱讀下面 的漫畫，按要求用英文寫一篇短文．

內(nèi)容要求：1）描述漫畫內(nèi)容；
2）分析漫畫所揭示的問題； 
3）提出你的看法．
注意：
1）短文開頭已給出，不計入總詞數(shù)；
2）考生可適當(dāng)發(fā)揮，使文章內(nèi)容充實、連貫；
3）詞數(shù)120左右．
4）文中不能出現(xiàn)考生的具體信息．
參考詞匯：pave the way
From the picture，we can see a family of three walking on a long red carpet．The son，well dressed，waves proudly in the middle while the father behind bends forward to hold the jacket and the mother in front rolls out the carpet，sweating．
It shows a common phenomenon nowadays that children are the focus of families，shouldering the hope of their parents．Parents arrange everything for their children and spare no effort to pave the way for their success．As a consequence，children become so reliant on their parents that they have no independent thought or creative ideas．
Such a situation is of great concern．In my opinion，overprotection and too much care are extremely bad for children's development．Instead of doing everything for them，parents should encourage their children to overcome difficulties and inspire them to develop by themselves．Only in this way can they grow up to be independent and become truly successful．．

Answer 1

分析 本文是看圖作文，根據(jù)所提供的一幅漫畫和所給要點信息談?wù)勆鐣�熱議的話題，現(xiàn)今父母包攬一切、孩子過度依賴等現(xiàn)象十分嚴(yán)重．在寫作時人稱以第三人稱為主．時態(tài)為一般將來時和一般現(xiàn)在時．重要短語：arrange sth for sb （為某人安排…）；spare no effort…（不遺余力），pave the way （為…鋪平道路），as a consequence （因為），overcome difficulties（克服困難），inspire sb to do （鼓勵某人做…），be independent（獨立），be reliant on（依賴于…）．

解答 From the picture we can see a family of three walking on a long red carpet．The son，well dressed，waves proudly in the middle while the father behind bends forward to hold the jacket and the mother in front rolls out the carpet，sweating．【高分句型】（描述漫畫）
 It shows a common phenomenon nowadays that children are the focus of families，shouldering the hope of their parents．Parents arrange everything for their children and spare no effort to pave the way for their success．As a consequence，children become so reliant on their parents that they have no independent thought or creative ideas．【高分句型】（揭示問題）
 Such a situation is of great concern．In my opinion，overprotection and too much care are extremely bad for children's development．Instead of doing everything for them，parents should encourage their children to overcome difficulties and inspire them to develop by themselves．Only in this way can they grow up to be independent and become truly successful．【高分句型】（自己看法）

點評 寫作看圖作文時，首先認(rèn)真看圖，結(jié)合圖片和文字，確定所要表達(dá)的主題是什么，然后圍繞主題，提煉要點，合理想象，對譯出的要點通過合理的組合，加上必要的連接詞使表達(dá)連貫．同時也要注意使用高級詞匯和高級句型使文章顯得更有檔次，平時需注意積累短語和重要句型．