3.【寫作內(nèi)容】
1.出生日期:1991年12月1日;
2.出生地點(diǎn):杭州;
3.個(gè)人情況:中國(guó)泳壇明星,中國(guó)人的驕傲;
4.畢業(yè)學(xué)校:浙江大學(xué);
5.專長(zhǎng):大學(xué)畢業(yè)后專攻長(zhǎng)距離自由泳*;
6.成績(jī):倫敦奧運(yùn)會(huì)獲兩塊金牌;2013年巴塞羅那**"世界錦標(biāo)賽"***男子400米、800米、1500米自由泳冠軍,4 x 200米自由泳接力季軍,
7.并被評(píng)為本屆世錦賽最佳男運(yùn)動(dòng)員,成為歷史上首次獲得這一獎(jiǎng)項(xiàng)的亞洲游泳選手.
參考詞匯:自由泳*freestyle swimming   巴塞羅那**Barcelona    世界錦標(biāo)賽***championships
【寫作要求】
1.只能使用五個(gè)句子表達(dá)全部?jī)?nèi)容;
2.文中不能出現(xiàn)真實(shí)姓名和學(xué)校.
【評(píng)分標(biāo)準(zhǔn)】
句子結(jié)構(gòu)準(zhǔn)確,信息內(nèi)容完整,篇章結(jié)構(gòu)連貫.

分析 這是一篇提綱作文,讓我們寫一篇關(guān)于介紹我國(guó)著名的游泳運(yùn)動(dòng)員--孫楊的作文,這需要我們發(fā)揮英語(yǔ)思維,將提供的信息用英語(yǔ)完整流暢的表達(dá)出來(lái).寫作需要用第三人稱,時(shí)態(tài)主要是一般過(guò)去時(shí),內(nèi)容要點(diǎn)包括:1.出生日期:1991年12月1日;2.出生地點(diǎn):杭州;3.個(gè)人情況:中國(guó)泳壇明星,中國(guó)人的驕傲;4.畢業(yè)學(xué)校:浙江大學(xué);5.專長(zhǎng):大學(xué)畢業(yè)后專攻長(zhǎng)距離自由泳;6.成績(jī):倫敦奧運(yùn)會(huì)獲兩塊金牌;2013年巴塞羅那"世界錦標(biāo)賽"男子400米、800米、1500米自由泳冠軍,4x 200米自由泳接力季軍,7.并被評(píng)為本屆世錦賽最佳男運(yùn)動(dòng)員,成為歷史上首次獲得這一獎(jiǎng)項(xiàng)的亞洲游泳選手.
重點(diǎn)短語(yǔ)與句型:
be proud of對(duì)…感到自豪,驕傲
concentrate on 集中注意力
win the third place 贏第三名
What's more而且,此外
高分句型一:Sun Yang,born in Hangzhou on Dec 1,1991,is a Chinese swimming star,who we Chinese are proud of.此句用了過(guò)去分詞born作后置定語(yǔ),以及who引導(dǎo)的定語(yǔ)從句
高分句型二:What's more,Sun Yang was awarded the best male swimmer of 2013 World Championships,becoming the first Asian swimmer to win such an award in history.此句用了現(xiàn)在分詞作結(jié)果狀語(yǔ),順其自然的結(jié)果.

解答 Sun Yang,born in Hangzhou on Dec 1,1991,is a Chinese swimming star,who we Chinese are proud of(高分句型一).
After graduating from Zhejiang University he has concentrated on long-distance freestyle swimming.
Besides winning two gold medals in London Olympic Games,he even eventually achieved his goal of becoming champions in men's 400m,800m and 1,500m freestyle events in the World Swimming Championships in Barcelona.
At the same time,together with his teammates,he also won the third place in the men's 4x200 meters freestyle relay in the Barcelona World Championships.
What's more,Sun Yang was awarded the best male swimmer of 2013 World Championships,becoming the first Asian swimmer to win such an award in history.(高分句型二)

點(diǎn)評(píng) 英語(yǔ)寫作是一項(xiàng)主觀性較強(qiáng)的測(cè)試題.它不僅考查學(xué)生的寫作基礎(chǔ)而且還考查學(xué)生在寫作過(guò)程中綜合運(yùn)用語(yǔ)言的能力.在撰寫時(shí)要注意主謂語(yǔ)一致,時(shí)態(tài)呼應(yīng),用詞貼切等.要提高英語(yǔ)寫作水平,需要兩方面的訓(xùn)練:一是語(yǔ)言基礎(chǔ)方面的訓(xùn)練,要有扎實(shí) 的造句、翻譯等基本功,即用詞法、句法等知識(shí)造出正確無(wú)誤的句子;二是寫作知識(shí)和能力 方面的訓(xùn)練以掌握寫作方面的基本方法和技巧.

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