Question

8．假設(shè)你是某中學(xué)的學(xué)生李華，最近參加了學(xué)校的"低碳生活社"．現(xiàn)在請(qǐng)根據(jù)社團(tuán)有關(guān)章程，用英語寫一封電子郵件給你的美國好友Jack，介紹你們社團(tuán)及其活動(dòng)情況．
寫作內(nèi)容

社團(tuán)名稱	低碳生活社
社團(tuán)宗旨	低碳生活，從我做起
成員義務(wù)	衣：衣著樸素，收集舊衣贈(zèng)災(zāi)區(qū)人民 食：在飯?zhí)贸燥垥r(shí)按量取食，吃天然或簡(jiǎn)單包裝食品 住：少用空調(diào)，使用節(jié)能燈，循環(huán)用水、紙張等 行：步行、騎自行車或使用公共交通工具 玩：選擇能源消耗少的娛樂，如爬山、游泳、打球等

寫作要求
1．只能用5個(gè)句子表達(dá)全部?jī)?nèi)容．
2．文中不能出現(xiàn)真實(shí)姓名和學(xué)校名稱．
3．郵件的開頭和結(jié)尾已給出，不計(jì)入總詞數(shù)．
評(píng)分標(biāo)準(zhǔn)
句子結(jié)構(gòu)準(zhǔn)確，信息內(nèi)容完整，篇章連貫．
Dear Jack，
How have you been？I'm glad to tell you that I have recently joined the"Low-carbon
Living Club"in our school．Now let me tell you something about it．
With the spirit of"Low-carbon living starts from me"，we encourage our club members to wear plain clothes and donatethe unneeded used ones to people in disaster-stricken areas． We advocate taking no more than what we need in the canteen and choosingnatural or simply-packed food． As club members，we try to limit the use of air conditioners，use energy-savinglights and recycle used water and paper．What's more，we are expected to walk，cycle or take publictransportation as much as possible，which are very effective and environmentally friendly． Last but not least，in our spare time，we choose to climb mountains，swim or do other outdoor sports instead of taking theentertainment that consumes a great deal of energy．
I am taking great delight in doing these and I am firmly convined that if everybody
can follow these，we will make world a better place．
Truly，
Li Hua．

Answer 1

分析 本文采用了"表格+提綱類"形式，根據(jù)文章所給提示信息給美國好友Jack寫一封電子郵件，介紹社團(tuán)及其活動(dòng)情況，既是提綱作文又是圖表類作文．時(shí)態(tài)應(yīng)該用一般現(xiàn)在時(shí)．人稱以第一人稱為主．重要短語：join the club（即將到來），encourage sb to do （推薦什么給），donate …．to…．（提醒某人…．），advocate doing  （就我所知道的而言），try to do sth （結(jié)果是），environmentally friendly．（環(huán)保的），in one's spare time （在某人空閑時(shí)間），a great deal of （很多），take great delight in…（以…為樂）．
【高分句型】
1．we are expected to walk，cycleor take public transportation as much as possible，whichare very effective and environmentally friendly．
這里是which引導(dǎo)的非限制性定語從句，which在從句中作主語，指代前面整個(gè)主句的內(nèi)容．
2．I am taking great delight in doing these and Iam firmly convinced that if everybody can follow these，wewill make world a better place．
這里是由that引導(dǎo)的賓語從句，賓語從句中又含if條件狀語從句，we will make world a better place是賓語從句中的主句．sb be convinced that+從句  某人相信

解答 Dear Jack，
  How have you been？I'm glad to tell you that Ihave recently joined the"Low-carbon Living Club"in our school．（社團(tuán)名稱）Now let me tell yousomething about it．
With the spirit of"Low-carbon living starts from me"，（社團(tuán)宗旨）we encourage our club membersto wear plain clothes and donate the unneeded used ones to people indisaster-stricken areas．（衣） We advocate taking no more than what we need in the canteenand choosing natural or simply-packed food．（食）As club members，we try to limit the use ofair conditioners，use energy-saving lights and recycle used water and paper．（�。� What's more，we are expected to walk，cycle or take public transportation as much as possible，which are very effective andenvironmentally friendly．【高分句型】（行） Last but not least，in our spare time，we choose to climb mountains，swim or do other outdoor sports instead of taking theentertainment that consumes a great deal of energy．（玩）（社團(tuán)義務(wù)）
I am taking great delight in doing these and I am firmlyconvinced that if everybody can follow these，we will make world a betterplace．【高分句型】（結(jié)尾）
Truly，
 Li Hua

點(diǎn)評(píng) 寫好這類圖表及提綱式作文的關(guān)鍵是認(rèn)真分析所給提示信息，靈活運(yùn)用英語知識(shí)，采用不同的表達(dá)方式將要點(diǎn)完整地表述出來，并認(rèn)真看圖，圍繞主題，提煉要點(diǎn)，發(fā)揮想象，語言力求準(zhǔn)確、簡(jiǎn)潔．選用合適的連接詞或過渡詞，使文章具有一定的連貫性．同時(shí)也要注意使用高級(jí)詞匯和高級(jí)句型使文章顯得更有檔次，最后還要認(rèn)真查驗(yàn)是否有漏寫情況，有無拼寫錯(cuò)誤及標(biāo)點(diǎn)誤用等．