10．假定英語(yǔ)課上老師要求同桌之間交換修改作文，請(qǐng)你修改你同桌寫的以下作文．文中共有10處語(yǔ)言錯(cuò)誤，每句中最多有兩處．每處錯(cuò)誤僅涉及一個(gè)單詞的增加、刪除或修改．
增加：在缺詞處加一個(gè)漏字符號(hào)（∧），并在其下面寫出該加的詞．
刪除：把多余的詞用斜線（\）劃掉．
修改：在錯(cuò)的詞下畫一橫線，并在該詞下面寫出修改后的詞．
注意：
（1）每處錯(cuò)誤及其修改均僅限一詞；
（2）只允許修改10處，多者（從第11處起）不計(jì)分．

I'm from Detroit in the United States，and during his senior year in high school I win a scholarship to study the singing during the summer in London．When I went there，I stayed in someone's home．The people were very sweetly，and it was a really fun summer．I got the inside view of that it's like to live there．I loved it，but I have to say，one thing that surprising me was that you had to go to such many different stores to do your shopping．There are also a lot of differences in the language．They said thing like"ring you up"instead of"give you a call．"It took me a little while figure out these differences，because it was fun．

分析 我來(lái)自底特律，高中時(shí)獲得了獎(jiǎng)學(xué)金，假期去英國(guó)學(xué)習(xí)唱歌．在那兒人們非常友好，我很開心．有件事我不得不說(shuō)，在那購(gòu)物你要去很多地方，語(yǔ)言也不一樣，但我很快就能明白，因?yàn)楹苡腥ぃ?/p>

解答 I'm from Detroit in the United States，and during his senior year in high school I win a scholarship to study the singing during the summer in London．When I went there，I stayed in someone's home．The people were very sweetly，and it was a really fun summer．I got the inside view of that it's like to live there．I loved it，but I have to say，one thing that surprising me was that you had to go to such many different stores to do your shopping．There are also a lot of differences in the language．They said thing like"ring you up"instead of"give you a call．"It took me a little while∧figure out these differences，because it was fun．
詳解：
1．his改為my；代詞錯(cuò)誤．句意指代的是I，要用形容詞性物主代詞．
2．win改為won；時(shí)態(tài)錯(cuò)誤．文章講述的是過(guò)去的事情，要用一般過(guò)去時(shí)態(tài)．
3．the去掉；冠詞錯(cuò)誤．句意表達(dá)的是泛指，不用冠詞．
4．sweetly改為sweet；形容詞錯(cuò)誤．系表結(jié)構(gòu)，后接形容詞．
5．that改為what；連詞錯(cuò)誤．句中it's like to live there作介詞of的賓語(yǔ)，是一個(gè)賓語(yǔ)從句；從句like后缺少賓語(yǔ)，且句意表達(dá)的是事情，要用what來(lái)連接．
6．surprising改為surprised；謂語(yǔ)動(dòng)詞錯(cuò)誤．句中that引導(dǎo)定語(yǔ)從句形式thing，從句要用謂語(yǔ)動(dòng)詞；文章表達(dá)的是過(guò)去，謂語(yǔ)動(dòng)詞要用一般過(guò)去時(shí)態(tài)．
7．such改為so；固定搭配錯(cuò)誤．so many如此多．
8．thing改為things；名詞錯(cuò)誤．句意表達(dá)的是復(fù)數(shù)．
9．加to；句型結(jié)構(gòu)錯(cuò)誤．句子結(jié)構(gòu)it takes sb some time to do sth做某事花某人多少時(shí)間．
10．because改為but；連詞錯(cuò)誤．句子前后是轉(zhuǎn)折關(guān)系．

點(diǎn)評(píng) 短文改錯(cuò)題考查的是語(yǔ)境理解能力和用法基礎(chǔ)知識(shí)．�？嫉闹R(shí)點(diǎn)有：名詞（單復(fù)數(shù)錯(cuò)誤），動(dòng)詞（時(shí)態(tài)，語(yǔ)態(tài)，搭配，轉(zhuǎn)換），代詞（指代錯(cuò)誤），形容詞和副詞（轉(zhuǎn)換，比較等級(jí)），連詞（and，but，or）等．偶爾也會(huì)考查邏輯錯(cuò)誤，如本來(lái)用her，卻用了his等等．解題是要注意：以句子為單位，以動(dòng)詞為中心．看句子要看完整，避免句子前后矛盾的錯(cuò)誤；找錯(cuò)誤要以動(dòng)詞為主，動(dòng)詞或與動(dòng)詞有關(guān)的錯(cuò)誤占了改錯(cuò)的題的重要一部分．

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