Question

18．假設(shè)你是紅星中學(xué)學(xué)生李華．你校英文報(bào)"外國(guó)文化"欄目擬刊登有關(guān)美國(guó)中學(xué)生日常生活的短文．請(qǐng)給美國(guó)朋友彼得寫封電子郵件約稿，要點(diǎn)如下：
1．欄目介紹；
2．稿件內(nèi)容；
3．稿件長(zhǎng)度：約400 詞；
4．交稿日期：5月28日前．
注意：
1．詞數(shù)不少于50；
2．開頭和結(jié)尾已給出，不計(jì)入總詞數(shù)．
Dear Peter，
                            
Yours，
Li Hua．

Answer 1

分析 高分句型一：
The"Foreign Cultures"section in our newspaper aims to introduce the cultures of foreign countries，which is very popular among us students．我們報(bào)紙"外國(guó)文化"版面想要介紹外國(guó)文化，那些文化在在學(xué)生群體中很流行．
高分句型二：
You can write anything relevant so long as it's interesting and informative．
你可以寫點(diǎn)相關(guān)的內(nèi)容，只要是有趣和有教育性的．
句型一 which is very popular among us students．該句是一個(gè)由which 作引導(dǎo)的非限制性定語從句，應(yīng)注意非限制性定語從句中切忌使用連詞that
句型二  so long as it's interesting and informative．該句是一個(gè)由as long as 引導(dǎo)的條件狀語從句
look forward to doing sth 盼望做某事

解答 Dear Peter，
       I'd like to invite you to write an article for our school's English newspaper．
       The"Foreign Cultures"section in our newspaper aims to introduce the cultures of foreign countries，which is very popular among us students．（高分句型一） It will carry articles about the daily life of American high school students．Would you please write something for it？You can write anything relevant so long as it's interesting and informative．（高分句型二）400 words would be fine．Could we have your article before May 28？
      I'm looking forward to hearing from you．
Yours，
Li Hua

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