Question

【題目】閱讀下面短文，然后按照要求寫(xiě)一篇150詞左右的英語(yǔ)短文。

An old proverb says, "Overcome evil by doing good." I read the news and see people who behead（將……斬首）others in the Middle East, abuse maids and domestic workers in Hong Kong, steal money and misuse power in government (not only in China but in the U.S. and every other part of the world), those who claim certain social ideals while privately practicing greed and living lifestyles that totally contradict their so-called 'ideals.' I only see the headlines and rarely read the stories. It is too depressing.

So, what do you do when there is so much evil in the world? What can YOU do about it?

There's only one thing that I know to do. I know (and feel it deep in my heart) to do good.

My way of overcoming evil in the world is too invest in the lives of Chinese children. I do this every day. I love 'giving back'. I love taking the money I earn and investing back into the lives of children. I will create a language learning lab in a public high school's international department (I already bought four new computers for it this week). The students need the tools to work on their English exams and prepare for TOEFL, IELTS and the SAT. There's no provision for them to have such a resource right now, so, rather than complain about it not being done, I decided, 'why don't I do something about it.' I know that I can and just decided to do it. It isn't anything great, but it will make a difference in the lives of some.

（寫(xiě)作內(nèi)容）

1、請(qǐng)以約30個(gè)詞概括上文的內(nèi)容；

2、請(qǐng)以約120個(gè)詞就“人需要行善”進(jìn)行議論，內(nèi)容包括：

（1）你是否贊成行善？人為什么需要行善？ （2）談?wù)勀憬窈蟠蛩闳绾涡猩疲?/span>

（寫(xiě)作要求）

1、作文中可以參照閱讀材料的內(nèi)容，但不能直接引用原文句子。

2、作文中不能出現(xiàn)真實(shí)的姓名和學(xué)校名稱(chēng)。

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Answer 1

【答案】The author not only emphasizes that one should overcome evil by doing good by listing some evil things in society, but also tells us the good things that he has done and will do in the future.

From my perspective, I firmly stand up for doing good. On one hand, doing good can help people acquiring (accumulate) merit which will make one end up being a man of good morality. On the other hand, doing good can have a great power which can give others warmth, help them out when they are in trouble, which eventually shape our own great career. Furthermore, doing good is just like a seed that can sow good and harvest hope, giving others hope, confidence and courage of life.

As for my future intention of doing good, firstly, I will strive to make money to assist those who are in need of help, such as building homes for orphans and for the lonely elderly and donating money to Hope Project. Secondly, I would like to be a volunteer, doing voluntary work helping the poor areas and people.

In conclusion, as long as we each contribute a bit of love to others, our world will become a beautiful harmonious place.

【解析】

本篇書(shū)面表達(dá)屬于議論文，表達(dá)自己對(duì)于行善的觀點(diǎn)以及自己對(duì)行善有什么打算。

第一步:審題

體裁:議論文

時(shí)態(tài):根據(jù)提示，應(yīng)為一般現(xiàn)在時(shí)和一般將來(lái)時(shí)。

結(jié)構(gòu):總分總法

總分總法是把主句作為總說(shuō)，分句分說(shuō)自己的觀點(diǎn)，以這種結(jié)構(gòu)安排所寫(xiě)的內(nèi)容。

要求:1、請(qǐng)以約30個(gè)詞概括上文的內(nèi)容；

2、請(qǐng)以約120個(gè)詞就“人需要行善”進(jìn)行議論，內(nèi)容包括：

（1）你是否贊成行善？人為什么需要行善？ （2）談?wù)勀憬窈蟠蛩闳绾涡猩疲?/span>

第二步:列提綱

not only...but also...不僅而且

From my perspective以我的觀點(diǎn)

stand up for支持

On one hand...On the other hand一方面另一方面

end up doing...結(jié)束做...

strive to do盡力做

such as 例如

in conclusion總而言之

第三步:連詞成句

1.The author not only emphasizes that one should overcome evil by doing good by listing some evil things in society, but also tells us the good things that he has done and will do in the future.

2.On one hand, doing good can help people acquiring (accumulate) merit which will make one end up being a man of good morality.

3.On the other hand, doing good can have a great power which can give others warmth, help them out when they are in trouble, which eventually shape our own great career.

4.I will strive to make money to assist those who are in need of help, such as building homes for orphans and for the lonely elderly and donating money to Hope Project.

5.In conclusion, as long as we each contribute a bit of love to others, our world will become a beautiful harmonious place.

將關(guān)鍵的詞語(yǔ)和短語(yǔ)連成句子，注意主謂一致和時(shí)態(tài)的問(wèn)題

第四步:連句成篇

1.表文章結(jié)構(gòu)順序：First of all, Firstly/First, Secondly/Second… And then, Finally, In the end, At last

2.表并列補(bǔ)充關(guān)系：What is more, Besides, Moreover, Furthermore, In addition As well as, not only…but (also), including

3.表轉(zhuǎn)折對(duì)比關(guān)系：However, On the contrary, but, Although+clause(從句), In spite of+n/doing,On the one hand…,On the other hand… Some…,while others…,as for, so…that… 4.表因果關(guān)系：Because, As, So, Thus, Therefore, As a result

連句成文，注意使用恰當(dāng)?shù)倪B詞進(jìn)行句子之間的銜接與過(guò)渡，書(shū)寫(xiě)一定要規(guī)范清晰。

第五步:潤(rùn)色修改