Question

17．It was time for supper．Mr．a(chǎn)nd Mrs．Beer were sitting at table
and waiting their daughter Jennet to return back from work．It was
late．The parents are worried about her．At last she came home and
told them that was happened．"While I was shopping in a crowded
shop after working，a thief picked my pocket，pushing the crowd
and ran away．What could I do？I had to asked the police on duty
for help and I got back my money．"Heard this，Mrs．Beer insisted
that Jennet not go shopping  alone any more，so  Jennet  said
laughingly，"April Fool!"

Answer 1

分析 到了晚飯時(shí)間，Beer夫婦坐在桌子旁等女兒Jennet下班回家吃飯．Jennet回來(lái)后告訴父母，今天下班后去買東西了，一個(gè)賊搶走了她的錢包，她只好向值班警察尋求幫助追回了錢包．Mrs．Beer 聽后堅(jiān)持要求女兒以后不要一人獨(dú)自購(gòu)物，但是Jennet卻大笑著說(shuō)"今天愚人節(jié)

解答 It was time for supper．Mr．a(chǎn)nd Mrs．Beer were sitting at∧table and waiting∧their daughter Jennet to return back from work．It was late．The parents are worried about her．At last she came home and told them that was happened．"While I was shopping in a crowded shop after working，a thief picked my pocket，pushing the crowd and ran away．What could I do？I had to asked the police on duty for help and I got back my money．"Heard this，Mrs．Beer insisted that Jennet not go shopping alone any more，so Jennet said laughingly，"April Fool!"
詳解：
1．table前面加the；考查定冠詞，at table意為"在吃飯"，at the table意為"坐在桌子旁"，分析句意為"Beer 夫婦坐在桌子旁等女兒下班回家"，故此處加the．
2．waiting后面加for；考查固定搭配，wait for sb 意為"等待某人"．
3．a(chǎn)re改為were；考查動(dòng)詞的時(shí)態(tài)，根據(jù)It was time for supper可知本文應(yīng)該用一般過去時(shí)，故此處are改為were．
4．that改為what；考查疑問代詞，這里what引導(dǎo)一個(gè)賓語(yǔ)從句，疑問代詞what在從句中作主語(yǔ)．
5．working改為work；考查名詞，work本身可以作為名詞，意為"工作"，after work意為"下班"．
6．pushing改為pushed；考查并列結(jié)構(gòu)，動(dòng)詞pushed與picked，ran在句中是并列成分，形式要保持一致，故用一般過去式．
7．a(chǎn)sked改為ask；考查動(dòng)詞，不定式符號(hào)to后面要跟動(dòng)詞原形，故用ask．
8．Heard改為Hearing；考查分詞作狀語(yǔ)，主語(yǔ)Mrs．Beer 與動(dòng)詞hear存在邏輯上的主謂關(guān)系，故用現(xiàn)在分詞形式作伴隨狀語(yǔ)．
9．so改為but；考查連詞，結(jié)合上下文分析句意為"聽了這些，Mrs．Beer 堅(jiān)持稱Jennet以后不要一個(gè)人去購(gòu)物了，但是Jennet大笑著說(shuō)"今天愚人節(jié)""．

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