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本周是你校的“文化·藝術(shù)周”，周三你們有幸邀請(qǐng)到了在W大學(xué)任教的外籍老師Hudson教授給高一（8）班的學(xué)生上了一節(jié)英語(yǔ)課。假如你是校報(bào)School Weekly Express的記者Linda sheng，請(qǐng)以An Impressive English Lesson為題按下列提示用英語(yǔ)寫(xiě)一篇100~120詞的新聞報(bào)道。

1．Hudson 教授上課的情況；

2．學(xué)生們的表現(xiàn)與評(píng)價(jià) ；

3．對(duì)學(xué)習(xí)英語(yǔ)的啟示。

注意：報(bào)道的標(biāo)題、開(kāi)頭和記者姓名已給出（不計(jì)詞數(shù)）。

An Impressive English Lesson

On Wednesday of this Culture & Art Week, we

 

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【答案】

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Possible version:

An Impressive English Lesson

On Wednesday of this Culture & Art Week we had the honour of inviting Prof. Hudson, a foreign teacher from W Univensity, to give a class to the students of Class Eight, Grade One. His class left the students a deep impression.

Prof. Hudson had a free talk with the students in simple but humorous English. He spoke slowly and clearly so that students could follow him well. Meanwhile, he would repeat just in time what students did not understand. Greatly inspired, most of the students took an active part in his class. After class, many students interviewed by us sang high praise for Prof. Hudson’s teaching.

From his lesson, students came to the conclusion that it is not so difficult to learn English well if you talk more in English. 

By Linda Sheng, School Weekly Express

                                                         

【解析】

試題分析：這是一篇提綱類(lèi)作文，首先要認(rèn)真閱讀題目。本周是你校的“文化·藝術(shù)周”，周三你們有幸邀請(qǐng)到了在W大學(xué)任教的外籍老師Hudson教授給高一（8）班的學(xué)生上了一節(jié)英語(yǔ)課。假如你是校報(bào)School Weekly Express的記者Linda sheng，請(qǐng)以An Impressive English Lesson為題按下列提示用英語(yǔ)寫(xiě)一篇100~120詞的新聞報(bào)道。1．Hudson 教授上課的情況；

2．學(xué)生們的表現(xiàn)與評(píng)價(jià) ；3．對(duì)學(xué)習(xí)英語(yǔ)的啟示。應(yīng)該用一般過(guò)去時(shí)來(lái)寫(xiě)。需要寫(xiě)的內(nèi)容已經(jīng)給出，但是寫(xiě)作時(shí)不要僅僅對(duì)要點(diǎn)進(jìn)行生硬的翻譯，而是要添加些內(nèi)容，使文章看起來(lái)更充實(shí)，要組成一篇通順連貫的短文。需要注意緊扣文章主題，給出的要點(diǎn)都需要包括，缺一不可。寫(xiě)作時(shí)注意準(zhǔn)確運(yùn)用時(shí)態(tài)，上下文意思連貫，符合邏輯關(guān)系，不能出現(xiàn)文章脫節(jié)問(wèn)題。盡量使用自己熟悉的單詞句式，同時(shí)也要注意使用高級(jí)詞匯和高級(jí)句型使文章顯得更有檔次。注意字?jǐn)?shù)，詞數(shù)100~120詞，不能太多，也不能太少。

考點(diǎn)：提綱類(lèi)作文

點(diǎn)評(píng)：本文屬于提綱類(lèi)作文，動(dòng)筆前，一定要認(rèn)真分析要點(diǎn)，理解要點(diǎn)要表達(dá)的含義，不能遺漏要點(diǎn)，跑題偏題。平時(shí)除了加強(qiáng)詞匯積累，寫(xiě)作聯(lián)系以外，還可以適當(dāng)記憶一些類(lèi)似的范文，這樣在考試中可以起到事半功倍的效果。