Question

10．開放作文
  請根據(jù)下面提示，寫一篇短文．詞數(shù)不少于50．
     In your spoken English class，your teacher shows you the following picture．You are asked to describe the picture and explain how you understand it．

Answer 1

分析 本文為看圖作文，主題是"不管面對多大困難，始終要堅持不懈，百折不撓，成功定會到來"．寫作時可按"二段式"來寫，首先描述圖片點明主題，然后分析概述其含義，發(fā)表感想．基本時態(tài)為一般現(xiàn)在時，人稱以第三人稱為主．重要短語：struggle all the way  （一路奮斗…..），remind sb of sth （提醒某人某物），give up （放棄），try one's best to do sth （努力做某事），succeed in sth（成功做某事），be faced with （面臨，面對）．

解答 In the picture，between two closely-located buildings grows a big tree．【高分句型】Unlike most trees，this one bends in the middle，struggling all the way up to get more sunshine．【高分句型】（描述圖片）
The picture reminds me of those who succeed in unfavorable conditions．【高分句型】Faced with difficulties，they never give up but try their best to find a way out．【高分句型】Life can be hard．But if we have the courage and determination，we will finally get the sunshine we want as the tree in the picture does．（理解圖片）

點評 寫作看圖作文時，首先認真看圖，結(jié)合圖片和文字，確定所要表達的主題是什么，然后圍繞主題，提煉要點，合理想象，對譯出的要點通過合理的組合，加上必要的連接詞使表達連貫．同時也要注意使用高級詞匯和高級句型使文章顯得更有檔次，平時需注意積累短語和重要句型．