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書面表達(dá) (滿分25分)
假如你是一名大學(xué)生，名叫李華。你所在的班級(jí)最近就“大學(xué)生是否應(yīng)經(jīng)濟(jì)獨(dú)立”的話題展開討論，同學(xué)們發(fā)表了不同的看法。請(qǐng)你根據(jù)以下所給內(nèi)容，寫一封信給某英語報(bào)社，反映討論情況。

60%的同學(xué)的看法	1.靠自己打工來支付學(xué)費(fèi)會(huì)影響學(xué)業(yè)； 2.現(xiàn)在把精力都用在學(xué)習(xí)上，將來報(bào)答父母的養(yǎng)育之恩；
25%的同學(xué)的看法	1.通過打工可以獲得工作經(jīng)驗(yàn)，了解社會(huì)； 2.體會(huì)父母掙錢不易，從而戒掉亂花錢的壞習(xí)慣；
15%的同學(xué)的看法 （包括你在內(nèi)）	覺得雙方的觀點(diǎn)都有一定的道理，但又不完全贊同； 我個(gè)人的看法是……

注意：1．文章的起始句已經(jīng)給出；         2．詞數(shù)150左右（不包括起始句）；
參考詞匯：報(bào)答: repay     學(xué)費(fèi): tuition    經(jīng)濟(jì)獨(dú)立: financially independent
Dear Editor,
I’m writing to tell you about a recent discussion our class have had on whether or not university students should be financially independent.
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Dear Editor,
I’m writing to tell you about a recent discussion our class have had on whether or not university students should be financially independent.
60% of the students think that university students don’t have to be financially independent, because trying to make money will have a deep influence on their studies. In addition, they think that they can repay their parents in the future.
25% of my classmates hold the view that doing part-time jobs will help one gain work experience and learn more of society. Besides, when students find it hard to make money, they will know it is not easy for parents to earn money and won’t waste their money any longer.
15% of the students, including myself, partly agree with the opinions above. Personally I think that as grownups, we should not depend on our parents any more. However, if our parents can afford to pay the tuition for us, we should put our studies in the first place.
Thank you for reading my letter.
Yours,
Li Hua

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