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1．假如英語課上老師要求同學(xué)們交換修改作文，請(qǐng)你修改你同桌寫的以下作文．文中共有10處語言錯(cuò)誤，要求你在錯(cuò)誤的地方增加、刪除或修改某個(gè)單詞．增加：在缺詞處加一個(gè)漏字符號(hào)（^），在其下面寫上該加的詞．刪除：把多余的詞用斜線（\）劃掉．修改：在錯(cuò)的詞下劃一橫線，在該詞下面寫上修改后的詞．注意：1．每處錯(cuò)誤及其修改均僅限一詞；2．只允許修改10處，多者（從第11處起）不計(jì)分．
editor，
Although I'm 16 years old，my father still treats me as a careless children．He doesn't value my opinion's．He is very strict to me and often punish me for leaving things lie around in the house while he does this all time．I think he fails to set an example to me to follow it．But he often says："Do as I say，not as I do．"Even bad，he points out my past mistakes to guests，making myself feel hurt．I love my father，but I can't bear that he does．I had tried many times to talk with him but he never listens．Please，help me．
Puzzled．

Answer 1

分析 作者在本文中向編輯講述了自己的苦惱，作者認(rèn)為爸爸仍舊把他當(dāng)成小孩子，不尊重他的觀點(diǎn)，并且不能給他做出好的榜樣，還在客人面前指出他曾經(jīng)犯過的錯(cuò)誤，這讓他不能忍受，為此，作者深感苦惱，希望能得到編輯的幫助．

解答 editor，
Although I'm 16 years old，my father still treats me as a careless children．He doesn't value
                                                                                                  child
my opinion's．He is very strict to me and often punish me for leaving things lie around in the
                                            with                  punishes                              lying
house while he does this all∧time．I think he fails to set an example to me to follow it．But he
                                       the                                                                             去掉it
often says："Do as I say，not as I do．"Even bad，he points out my past mistakes to guests，
                                                                 worse
making myself feel hurt．I love my father，but I can't bear that he does．I had tried many times
              me                                                                     what                have
to talk with him but he never listens．Please，help me．
Puzzled．
1．children改為child；考查名詞，child是可數(shù)名詞，前面有不定冠詞a表示一個(gè)，故用單數(shù)形式．
2．to改為with；考查介詞，be strict with 是固定短語，意為"對(duì)…嚴(yán)格要求"，故to改為with．
3．punish改為punishes；考查動(dòng)詞的時(shí)態(tài)，本文用的是一般現(xiàn)在時(shí)，這一句子的主語是he，所以動(dòng)詞punish要用第三人稱單數(shù)形式．
4．lie改為lying；考查分詞作狀語，這里things和動(dòng)詞lie是主動(dòng)關(guān)系，故用現(xiàn)在分詞形式 lying 作狀語．
5．a(chǎn)ll后面加 the；考查固定短語，all time意為"全部時(shí)間"，all the time意為"總是，一直"，結(jié)合語境分析句意應(yīng)為"他不允許我在房間里亂扔?xùn)|西，而他卻總是這樣做"，所以all后面要加the，表示"總是，一直"．
6．去掉follow后面的it；考查句式結(jié)構(gòu)，set an example to sb to follow意為"為某人樹立一個(gè)榜樣"，其中的an example作動(dòng)詞follow的賓語，所以段文中follow后面的it重復(fù)，故去掉it．
7．bad改為worse；考查形容詞的比較級(jí)；even此處意為"甚至，更加"，后面跟形容詞的比較級(jí)形式．
8．myself改為me；考查人稱代詞，分析句子結(jié)構(gòu)，此處應(yīng)該用me作make的賓語，意為"使我感覺受到傷害"．
9．that改為what；考查代詞，結(jié)合語境分析，句意應(yīng)為"我不能忍受他所做的"，可知此處要用疑問代詞what引導(dǎo)賓語從句，what在從句中作動(dòng)詞does的賓語．
10．had改為have；考查動(dòng)詞的時(shí)態(tài)，本文通篇用的是一般現(xiàn)在時(shí)態(tài)，根據(jù)句意，此處應(yīng)該用現(xiàn)在完成時(shí)，故had改為have．

點(diǎn)評(píng) 整體理解短文，充分運(yùn)用所學(xué)的基礎(chǔ)知識(shí)，包括一些實(shí)詞和虛詞的用法，固定短語搭配，習(xí)慣性用法，結(jié)合上下文整體關(guān)系，找出錯(cuò)誤并加以修正．