【題目】請(qǐng)你以“Music and Life”為題，用英語(yǔ)寫(xiě)一篇100詞左右的短文，要點(diǎn)如下：

1．音樂(lè)無(wú)處不在，音樂(lè)是我們生活的一部分；

2．音樂(lè)的種類(lèi)和形式十分豐富；

3．音樂(lè)的功能也是多種的，在不同的場(chǎng)合聽(tīng)不同的音樂(lè)，會(huì)有不同的心情；

4．我對(duì)音樂(lè)的感覺(jué)。

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【答案】Music and Life

Do you like music? Do you think music is one of the most important parts in your life? Can you imagine what life will be like without music?

As a matter of fact, music is everywhere and it is part of our life. There are many kinds of music, such as, classical music, symphony, light music, jazz, rock and roll, disco, folk music, and so on.

Music, in my mind, is multifunctional. Sometimes it can bring you to a fancy world. Music is the perfect way that you can express your different feelings and moods. Music can not only make you happy, excited, but also make you upset or calm. Above all, music is a universal language. There is no border between music. Though sometimes you don't understand foreign language, it can't still prevent you from feeling the music abroad.

I am a super music lover. Music becomes part of my life. It is one of my true friends.

【解析】本文屬于提綱作文。提綱作文寫(xiě)作技巧：全面審題，確定層次。

1、審題：所謂審題就是要看清題意，確定文章的中心思想并圍繞中心思想組織材料。

2、進(jìn)行構(gòu)思，列出簡(jiǎn)單的提綱，打造文章之骨架。

3、擴(kuò)展成文。注意以下方面問(wèn)題：避免只是用一兩個(gè)句式或重復(fù)用同一詞語(yǔ)。要靈活運(yùn)用各種句式，從而增加文章的可讀性。注意使用高級(jí)框架結(jié)構(gòu)的句子，讓文章的結(jié)構(gòu)錯(cuò)落有致。用好連接詞，做到所寫(xiě)文章層次分明，思路清晰，文字連貫，前后表達(dá)渾然一體。

亮點(diǎn)分析：通過(guò)審題可知本文是以“Music and Life”為題，因此所有內(nèi)容都以音樂(lè)與生活為中心組織材料。在第一段以問(wèn)句的形式提出問(wèn)題，更能激起人們的興趣。第二段，以幾個(gè)簡(jiǎn)單句作為事實(shí)從而引出了音樂(lè)無(wú)處不在的事實(shí)，音樂(lè)是我們生活的一部分。 并把音樂(lè)的種類(lèi)和形式作了列舉。接著使用一系列的排比句更加確定了音樂(lè)的功能是多種多樣的，同時(shí)在不同的場(chǎng)合聽(tīng)不同的音樂(lè)會(huì)有不同的心情，表達(dá)的淋漓盡致。在最后一段表達(dá)了自己作為一個(gè)音樂(lè)愛(ài)好者對(duì)音樂(lè)的感覺(jué)。整個(gè)文章思路清晰，一氣呵成。

總之整個(gè)文章句式多變，使用多種復(fù)合句。文中運(yùn)用了that引導(dǎo)的定語(yǔ)從句：Music is the perfect way that you can express your different feelings and moods；由not only…but also…引導(dǎo)的并列句，如Music can not only make you happy, excited, but also make you upset or calm.；由though引導(dǎo)的狀語(yǔ)從句如：Though sometimes you don't understand foreign language, it can't still prevent you from feeling the music abroad.。在文章中也使用了許多連接詞。如not only…but also…，though，I am a super music lover. Music becomes part of my life. It is one of my true friends.。這一切都增加了文章的可讀性。

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