Question

【題目】假定你是學生會主席李華。最近，一批來自澳大利亞的高中生將來你校訪問。請你寫一篇英語發(fā)言稿，介紹為他們安排的活動。內(nèi)容包括：

1.參觀校園；

2.觀看介紹學校的短片；

3.體驗中國的傳統(tǒng)節(jié)日—重陽節(jié)（the Double Ninth Festival）

注意：

1.詞數(shù)100左右；

2.可以適當增加細節(jié)，以使行文連貫。

Dear Friends,

Welcome to our school.

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Yours,

Li Hua

Answer 1

【答案】Dear friends,

Welcome to our school. I’m Li Hua, president of the Student Council. Now I’d like to tell you something about the schedule for your visit.

First of all, I will show you around our campus so that you can get a general impression of our school. After that, you’ll watch a short video that will help you learn more about the history, characteristics, staff and students of our school. What’s more, you will participate in some activities to celebrate the Double Ninth Festival-one of the Chinese traditional festivals, which will provide a good opportunity for you to experience Chinese culture. I hope it will be an unforgettable experience for you.

In a word, I hope you can have a good stay with us and enjoy yourselves.

Thanks.

Yours,

Li Hua

【解析】本文屬于提綱類作文，要求假定你是學生會主席李華。最近，一批來自澳大利亞的高中生將來你校訪問。請你寫一篇英語發(fā)言稿，介紹為他們安排的活動。要注意發(fā)言稿的格式和特殊用詞。考慮用一般將來時來寫。要點：1.參觀校園；2.觀看介紹學校的短片；

3.體驗中國的傳統(tǒng)節(jié)日—重陽節(jié)（the Double Ninth Festival）。這篇文章對于考生的綜合能力要求較高，要求考生有很強的謀篇布局的能力和組織要點的能力。需要注意緊扣文章主題，給出的要點都需要包括，缺一不可。寫作時注意準確運用時態(tài)，上下文意思連貫，符合邏輯關系，一定要契合給出的開頭，不能出現(xiàn)文章脫節(jié)問題。盡量使用自己熟悉的單詞句式，同時也要注意使用高級詞匯和高級句型使文章顯得更有檔次。

【亮點說明】本篇書面表達要點全面，結構緊湊，是一篇較好的范文。這篇短文使用了大量的短語，為文章增色不少，如: First of all首先，What’s more另外。還使用了定語從句After that, you’ll watch a short video that will help you learn more about the history, characteristics, staff and students of our school.和賓語從句I hope it will be an unforgettable experience for you.等多種句式結構，增加了文章的可讀性。