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4．假定英語(yǔ)課上老師要求同桌之間交換修改作文，請(qǐng)你修改你同桌寫的以下作文．文中共有10處語(yǔ)言錯(cuò)誤，每句中最多有兩處．對(duì)標(biāo)有題號(hào)的每一行作出判斷：如無(wú)錯(cuò)誤，在該行右邊橫線上畫一個(gè)勾（√）如有錯(cuò)誤（每行只有一個(gè)錯(cuò)誤），則按下列情況改正：
刪除：把多余的詞用斜線（\）劃掉，在該行右邊橫線上寫出該詞，并也用斜線劃掉．
增加：在缺詞處加一個(gè)漏字符合（^），在該行右邊橫線上寫出該加的詞．
修改：在錯(cuò)的詞下劃一橫線，在該行右邊橫線上寫出改正后的詞．
注意：（1）每處錯(cuò)誤及其修改均僅限一詞；
（2）至允許修改10處，多者（從第11處起）不計(jì)分．
     Christine was just a girl in one of my class．I  never knew much about
√
 Her except for that she was strange．she didn't talk many．her hair was black
去掉for，many-much
and purple，and she worn black sports shoes and a black sweater，although  in the
worn-wore，although-even
summer．she was，infact，rather attractively，and she never seemed  care what
attractively-attractive，seem 后面加to
 the rest of us thought about  her．like the rest of my classmate，I didn't really
classmate-classmates
 want to get closest to her．it was only when we did their chemistry projiect
closest-close，their-our
  together that I  beginto uanderstand why christine  dressed the way she did．
begin-began．

Answer 1

分析 文章大意：本文主要介紹了作者的一位奇怪的同學(xué)---Christine．她喜歡穿著黑色的運(yùn)動(dòng)鞋和黑色的毛衣，她好像從來(lái)不在乎其他人的想法．

解答 Christine was just a girl in one of my class．I  never knew much about
Her except forthat she was strange．she didn't talk many．her hair was black
                去掉for                                             much
and purple，and she wornblack sports shoes and a black sweater，although in the
                              wore                                                             even
summer．she was，in fact，rather attractively，and she never seemed∧care what
                                                 attractive                                    to
the rest if us thought about  her．like the rest of my classmate，I didn't really
                                                                          classmates
want to get closest to her．it was only when we did their chemistry projiect 
                   close                                                  our
 together that I  beginto uanderstand why christine  dressed the way she did．
                       began

1．except  for---except   考查介詞搭配．for 后面接短語(yǔ)不結(jié)從句，本句后面是that從句，所以去掉for．
2．talk many--talk much  考查代詞，這里是指這個(gè)女孩說(shuō)話不多，不是指代可數(shù)名詞復(fù)數(shù)，而是抽象的泛指．
3．worn--wore 考查動(dòng)詞的形式．本句謂語(yǔ)是過(guò)去時(shí)態(tài)，用過(guò)去式即可，不必用過(guò)去分詞．
4．a(chǎn)lthough---even  考查連詞．a(chǎn)lthough后面接句子，引導(dǎo)讓步狀語(yǔ)從句，而本句后面是介詞短語(yǔ)，句意為：甚至在夏天，她也是這樣的穿著．
5．a(chǎn)ttractively---attractive考查形容詞形式．  （rather相當(dāng)于副詞，后面跟形容詞）
6．seemed  care---seemed  to  care 考查動(dòng)詞不定式，seem to do sth固定搭配． 
7．classmate--classmates 考查名詞單復(fù)數(shù)．這里是可數(shù)名詞，指我們班其他的同學(xué)們，所以應(yīng)該用復(fù)數(shù)．
8．closest---close  考查短語(yǔ)搭配．get  close to 是固定短語(yǔ)，接近的意思，不含最高級(jí)．
9．their---our 考查人稱代詞．根據(jù)語(yǔ)義，只有在我們做我們的化學(xué)實(shí)驗(yàn)時(shí)我才明白她為什么這么穿著．
10．begin--began 考查動(dòng)詞形式．本句前面的時(shí)間狀語(yǔ)從句是過(guò)去時(shí)，所以主句應(yīng)該用過(guò)去時(shí)態(tài)．

點(diǎn)評(píng) 本篇短文改錯(cuò)考查涉及動(dòng)詞形式，名詞單復(fù)數(shù)，時(shí)態(tài)，形容詞形式等，平時(shí)注重多積累，答題時(shí)結(jié)合句意和語(yǔ)法進(jìn)行分析，答完后通讀，是否通順，符合邏輯．