Question

假設(shè)你是John, 你的筆友李華口語不好，他來信請你談?wù)勀愕囊庖�。你給他寫一封回信。提出以下看法和建議：
1. 在課堂上要積極發(fā)言，多爭取說英語的機會。如果說錯，老師會幫助你糾正錯誤。
2. 在課內(nèi)課外盡可能多地說英語，熟能生巧。
3. 找一個喜歡說英語的同學(xué)共同實踐，相互幫助。
4. 不要失去信心，不要怕說錯，不要怕別人譏笑。
5. 只要堅持下去，一定能提高英語口語水平。
注意：1. 詞數(shù)：120-150.
2．可適當(dāng)增加細節(jié)，以使行文連貫。
3．信的開頭界唯一為你寫好。
Dear Li Hua,
Thank you for your letter. _________________________________________
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Yours sincerely,
John

Answer 1

Dear Li Hua,
Thank you for your letter. I’m sorry to know that you have some trouble with your spoken English.
Here is some of my advice on improving your spoken English:
First of all, in class you must be active. Get every chance to speak. If you make any mistake, your teacher and your classmates will help you. Try to speak English in and after class as much as possible. As you know, practice makes perfect.
Why not find someone with whom you can practise speaking English? Thus you can help each other.
Don’t lose heart in your spoken English, and don’t be afraid of making any mistake or being laughed at. As long as you keep on speaking English, you are sure to improve your spoken English.
Yours sincerely,
John

試題分析：這是一篇提綱類作文，我們需要用正確的英語把給出的要點表達出來.本作文中給出的要點比較具體,故需要準(zhǔn)確表達.寫作時注意準(zhǔn)確運用時態(tài)，上下文意思連貫，符合邏輯關(guān)系，盡量使用自己熟悉的單詞句式，同時也要注意使用高級詞匯和高級句型使文章顯得更有檔次。特別注意在選擇句式時要賦予變化。
點評：本文屬于提綱類作文，動筆前，一定要認真分析要點，理解要點要表達的含義，不能遺漏要點，跑題偏題。平時除了加強詞匯積累，寫作聯(lián)系以外，還可以適當(dāng)記憶一些類似的范文，這樣在考試中可以起到事半功倍的效果。