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富人做慈善事業(yè)近年來(lái)越來(lái)越受到社會(huì)的關(guān)注。有的人認(rèn)為理所當(dāng)然，有的人認(rèn)為他們應(yīng)當(dāng)受到稱頌。針對(duì)這種現(xiàn)象，你校英語(yǔ)俱樂(lè)部組織了一次英語(yǔ)辯論賽，請(qǐng)根據(jù)以下要點(diǎn)寫一篇不少于120詞的英語(yǔ)短文，陳述以下兩種不同觀點(diǎn)并發(fā)表自己的意見(jiàn)。文章的開頭已給出，不計(jì)入總詞數(shù)。

富人做慈善事業(yè)是否理所當(dāng)然
正方觀點(diǎn)	反方觀點(diǎn)	你的觀點(diǎn)
1. 富人財(cái)富來(lái)自社會(huì)； 2. 富人應(yīng)該回報(bào)社會(huì)，做慈善事業(yè)理所應(yīng)當(dāng)。	1、 富人的財(cái)富是靠合法經(jīng)營(yíng)和辛苦勞動(dòng)得來(lái)的； 2、富人做慈善應(yīng)該受到稱頌。	……

 
Nowadays, many rich people are enthusiastic about charities.                                             
                                                                                            

Answer 1

Nowadays, many rich people are enthusiastic about charities. Some people take it for granted that the rich have the responsibility to contribute to charities. However, others maintain those wealthy people deserve praise for their selfless honored behaviors.
Those people who hold the first opinion believe the rich can not get rich without others in the society and that they should give back to society.
However, others think differently. In their opinions, the wealthy people’s success is the result of their hard work.. They also argued that charity is not only the duty of rich people but every citizen’s duty.
Personally, I agree with the latter. After all, the rich people are successful because they have worked hard and have a legal business. I think we should praise and respect those who have made or are making contributions to charities.

試題分析：本篇書面表達(dá)為對(duì)比型議論文。論題為：富人做慈善事業(yè)是否理所當(dāng)然。文章結(jié)構(gòu)為：?現(xiàn)象（富人做慈善事業(yè)近年來(lái)越來(lái)越受到社會(huì)的關(guān)注）引入句（有的人認(rèn)為理所當(dāng)然，有的人認(rèn)為他們應(yīng)當(dāng)受到稱頌→②正方觀點(diǎn)闡述→?反方觀點(diǎn)闡述→④自己的觀點(diǎn)，本文章要求論述兩種不同觀點(diǎn)并給出自己的看法。引入句已寫好，可以直接寫支持者的觀點(diǎn)和反對(duì)者的觀點(diǎn)然后寫自己的看法。
常用結(jié)構(gòu) 1．有一些人認(rèn)為。。。 2．另一些人認(rèn)為。。。3．我的看法。。。
The topic of ①-----------------（主題）is becoming more and more popular recently. There are two sides of opinions of it. Some people say A is heir favorite. They hold their view for the reason of②-------------（支持A的理由一）What is more, ③-------------理由二). Moreover,④------------(理由三).
While others think that B is a better choice in the following three reasons. Firstly,-------(支持B的理由一). Secondly (besides),⑥-------------（理由二）. Thirdly (finally),⑦--------------(理由三) From my point of view, I think ⑧----------------（我的觀點(diǎn)）. The reason is that...
點(diǎn)評(píng)：對(duì)比型議論文結(jié)構(gòu)典型，要記住基本結(jié)構(gòu)，另外多記憶一些模板句。如：
We have had a heated discussion/debate on/about....Different people have different opinions.Every coin has two sides.some people think.....while others...,及短語(yǔ)in favor of ,be for ,be against ,in agreement with ,in my opinion/view,as far as I’m concerned,personally