Question

9．請(qǐng)你根據(jù)以下提示，結(jié)合生活中的一個(gè)事例，用英語(yǔ)寫一篇短文，談?wù)勎⑿Φ淖饔茫?br />     The best example of universally understood body language may be the smile．A smile can help us get through difficult situations and find friends in a world of  strangers．A smile can open doors and tear down walls．
注意：①無(wú)須寫標(biāo)題；
②內(nèi)容只需涉及一個(gè)方面；
③詞數(shù)為100左右．

Answer 1

分析 本文屬于提綱類作文，根據(jù)所給提示信息結(jié)合生活中的一個(gè)事例寫一篇短文．闡述微笑的作用，又屬于半開(kāi)放性作文的寫作．寫作時(shí)基本時(shí)態(tài)為一般現(xiàn)在，人稱以第三人稱為主．重要短語(yǔ)：not only…but also…（不但，而且），enable sb to do （使某人能做某事），suffer from…（遭受…），rescue sb from …（從…中營(yíng)救），smile to…（對(duì)…微笑），be in sadness （處在悲痛中），no exaggeration（不夸張）．

解答 No body languages can be more attractive/fascinating than smiling．Not only can a beautiful smile make ourselves happy，but also it enables others to feel delighted．【高分句型】Sometimes when a smile is so powerful that it gives people suffering from disasters great courage．（引出話題）
A little boy named Lang Zheng，for instance，impressed and encouraged a great many people when a serious earthquake happened in Wen Chuan．Right after he was rescued by the soldiers from the ruins，he saluted and smiled to them．His smile was like sunshine which warmed people who were in sadness．【高分句型】（具體事例）
It is safe/no exaggeration to say that without smile our life would be colorless and difficult．It is suggested that we smile as much as possible．【高分句型】（結(jié)尾深化）

點(diǎn)評(píng) 提綱作文在寫作時(shí)要注意內(nèi)容是否包含了所有要點(diǎn)．寫作時(shí)注意準(zhǔn)確運(yùn)用時(shí)態(tài)，上下文意思連貫，符合邏輯關(guān)系，盡量使用自己熟悉的單詞句式，同時(shí)也要注意使用高級(jí)詞匯和高級(jí)句型使文章顯得更有檔次，平時(shí)需注意積累短語(yǔ)和重要句型．