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5．請你對其下面是一段短文進行修改．文中共有10處錯誤，每句中最多有兩處．錯誤 涉及一個單詞的增加、刪除或修改．
增加：在缺詞處加一個漏詞符號（∧），并在此符號下面寫出該加的詞． 刪除：把多余的詞用斜線（\）劃掉．
修改：在錯的詞下劃一橫線，并在該詞下面寫出修改后的詞．
注意：1．每處錯誤及其修改均僅限一詞；
2．只允許修改10處，多者（從第11處起）不計分．
With the development of modern society，fast food restaurants are becoming more and more popular to many people in the world，but they are especial popular with children．
One reason is because many fast food restaurants now give a child a present with every Child's meal，which draw more and more children's attention．Most fast food restaurants made a series of toys for customers to collect them．The collectors are not only children．
There are lots of adult who also enjoy collecting the toys such as teddy bears，model cars or electronic toys．Some people had collected the toys for many years．Believe it or not，some of the older toy collections worth much money．

Answer 1

分析 文章大意：本文主要介紹了快餐受歡迎的原因．很多快餐店給孩子禮物，這吸引了越來越多小孩的注意力，大部分的快餐店做了一系列的玩具讓顧客收藏，收藏不僅是小孩，還有很多成年人．

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1．to--with  考查介詞搭配．be popular with 是固定短語，意思是"受某人的歡迎"．
2．especial--especially 考查副詞． 本句中應(yīng)該用副詞修飾形容詞．
3．becasue--that 考查表語從句．the reason 做主語，后面的表語從句如果不缺少主語、賓語或表語時，則用that引出原因．
4．draw--draws 考查主謂一致．本句中含有定語從句，which代指前面一件事，所以謂語動詞應(yīng)該用第三人稱單數(shù)．
5．made--make 考查時態(tài)．本文主要敘述了目前的情況，所以用一般現(xiàn)在時．
6．去掉collect后面的   them 考查代詞．to collect是不定式修飾前面的toys，collect 的邏輯賓語其實就是toys，所以去掉them．
7．a(chǎn)dult--adults  考查名詞 單復(fù)數(shù)． 前面有 lots of 修飾，adult是可數(shù)名詞，所以用復(fù)數(shù)形式．
8．or--and 考查連詞．前后幾個詞是并列關(guān)系．
9．had--have 考查時態(tài)．本文主要敘述了目前的情況，所以用一般現(xiàn)在時．
10．worth前面加  are 考查謂語動詞．本句中應(yīng)該是系表結(jié)構(gòu)，形容詞前面應(yīng)該加be動詞．

點評 改錯題要注意代詞，連詞以及詞性、人稱的轉(zhuǎn)化．
做好短文改錯題，可以從以下三方面去考慮：1．快速閱讀短文，如抓住中心思想，從整體上對短文有個了解． 2．充分運用語言的基礎(chǔ)知識，從句型結(jié)構(gòu)、詞的變化、詞類選擇、詞的搭配、習(xí)慣用法出發(fā)，進行分析判斷，盡快找出錯誤在何處． 3．重視整體和語境，從上下文關(guān)系中找出表達連接關(guān)系或邏輯關(guān)系的詞或詞組，判斷是遞進關(guān)系還是轉(zhuǎn)折關(guān)系，是因果關(guān)系還是讓步關(guān)系．