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17．2014青島世界園藝博覽會 （International Horticultural Exposition 2014Qingdao） 于4月25日至10月25日在青島舉行．組委會面向社會招聘涉外志愿者．假如你是李華，想在暑假期間做志愿者，請你用英語寫一封應(yīng)聘信．內(nèi)容包括：應(yīng)聘的原因、你的優(yōu)勢，以及如何做好志愿者等等．
注意：1．詞數(shù)：120-150；
2．可以適當(dāng)增加細(xì)節(jié)，以使行文連貫；
3．信的開頭結(jié)尾已給出，不計入總詞數(shù)．
Dear Sir，
      
Yours，
Li Hua．

Answer 1

分析 高分句型：
句型一：
For one thing（1），I am familiar with（2）Qingdao，which （3）can be helpful in the role as a volunteer．首先，我熟悉青島，這對擔(dān)任志愿者有幫助．
（1）for one thing首先；往往與for another連用列舉原因，表示"首先…再則…"．
（2）be familiar with對…熟悉．
（3）which引導(dǎo)了非限制性定語從句，指代整個主句，使文章顯得簡練．
句型二：
It is necessary that its volunteers be familiar with the culture and history of Qingdao．志愿者有必要熟悉青島的歷史和文化．
It is necessary that…表示"有必要…"，從句中的動詞要求用虛擬語氣的形式"（should）+do"．
句型三：
I would appreciate it if（1）I could be given the chance to challenge myself（2）．如果我能夠得到這樣的挑戰(zhàn)自我的機會我將非常感激．
（1）I would appreciate it if…表示"如果…將非常感激"，是表示請求的客套語，其中it是形式賓語．
（2）challenge oneself挑戰(zhàn)自我

解答 Dear sir，
My name is Li Hua，a high school student（自我介紹）．I'm writing to apply for a position as a volunteer for the International Horticultural Exposition 2014 Qingdao．（寫信的目的）I consider it a great opportunity to improve myself and helpful to the success of the great event （應(yīng)聘的原因）．
I am completely qualified for the position．For one thing，I am familiar with Qingdao，which can be helpful in the role as a volunteer【高分句型一】．For another，I have a gift for communicating with others； and my spoken English is so excellent that I have no difficulty communicating with English-speaking foreigners（我的優(yōu)勢）．
To be a good volunteer，we are supposed to be polite and patient．Since the IHE is held in Qingdao，it is necessary that its volunteers be familiar with the culture and history of Qingdao【高分句型二】．
I would appreciate it if I could be given the chance to challenge myself【高分句型三】．Best wishes to you（表達(dá)希望和祝愿）．
 
Yours
Li Hua

點評 寫作時首先審題要到位：審體裁、人稱和時態(tài)；審要點，不能有要點的遺漏．其次要考慮高級詞語和句型的選用；再次，運用關(guān)聯(lián)詞如besides、what's  more、moreover、for one thing …for another等，使文字更加流暢．