Question

17．如今很多中學生都紛紛開起了自己的博客，請對這一現(xiàn)象進行簡要介紹，并發(fā)表自己 的看法．
注意：1．詞數(shù)：120左右，開頭已給出，不計入總詞數(shù)；
2．參考調(diào)匯：開博客open one's blog
Nowadays，it's not an uncommon phenomenon that more and more high school students open their own blogs on the Internet．        ．

Answer 1

分析 高分句型一：
Nowadays，it's not an uncommon phenomenon that more and more high school students open their own blogs on the Internet．現(xiàn)在，越來越多的高中生在網(wǎng)絡上開通了他們的微博是一個非常普遍的現(xiàn)象了．
高分句型二：
On the contrary，many parents and teachers think that managing one's blog takes a lot of time and energy．
相反，許多父母和老師認為開通微博會浪費許多的時間和精力．
句型一  it's not an uncommon phenomenon that more and more high school students…該句是一個由it充當形式主語，而真正的主語由that后面引導的從句充當?shù)闹髡Z從句
句型二 many parents and teachers think that managing one's blog takes…該句中有一個that引導的賓語從句，that只作引導詞，不作句子成分．而該賓語從句的主語是一個動名詞短語充當?shù)模?br />另有還有 more and more…on the contrary 等重點短語在文中的使用

解答 One possible version
        Nowadays，it's not an uncommon phenomenon that more and more high school students open their own blogs on the Internet．（高分句型一）For one thing，it can provide a platform to show their talent and release their pressure，thus making it more and more popular with high school students．On the contrary，many parents and teachers think that managing one's blog takes a lot of time and energy．（高分句型二）    
       Personally speaking，I approve of the former opinion．Opening and organizing an eye-catching blog needs various abilities such as writing，designing，being skillful at computer and so on．Only if we master those abilities can we make a successful blog．As a consequence，we improve ourselves during the procedures of organizing our blogs．
     Anyway，the blog itself is of little harm．It is your attitude towards it that matters．We should take the advantages and avoid some bad effects．

點評 本書面表達是一篇議論文，寫作時應注意將敘述、描寫等手法結(jié)合到議論中，為議論提供依據(jù)，用說明為理論的展開創(chuàng)造條件，除此還應注意邏輯清晰．