Question

【題目】假定英語課上老師要求同桌之間交換修改作文，請(qǐng)你修改同桌寫的寫下作文。文中共有10處語言錯(cuò)誤，每句中最多有兩處錯(cuò)誤。每處錯(cuò)誤涉及一個(gè)單詞的增加、刪除或修改。

增加：在缺詞處加一個(gè)漏字符號(hào)（∧），并在其下面寫出該加的詞。

刪除：把多余的詞用斜線（＼）劃掉。

修改：在錯(cuò)的詞下劃一橫線，并在該詞下面寫出修改后的詞。

注意：1、每處錯(cuò)誤及其修改均僅限一詞；

只允許修改 10處，多者（從第11處起）不計(jì)分。

Dear Editor,

I’m a middle school student naming Li Ming. I’m writing to tell you something. Recently I’ve notiecd many of my classmates often to go to the cyber cafe （網(wǎng)吧） near our school. The other day I went here, too. I was surprised to see many students played computer games, seeing films or chatting. Some students were even talking about love affairs online. On my opinion, cyber cafes should be a place which we can find much useful informations. Internet should be a window to the outside world rather than a place for games. Internet is good if we make good use it. Otherwise, it will do us great harm. So the local government should take measure to make sure that students use cyber cafes positive.

Answer 1

【答案】1.naming改為named

2.去掉often后的to

3.將here改為there

4.played改為playing

5.on改為In。

6.which 改為where

7.informations改為information

8.use后加of。

9.measure改為measures

10.positive 改為positively

【解析】1.此句中過去分詞做后置定語，故把naming改為named。

2.賓語從句中缺少謂語動(dòng)詞，故去掉often后的to。

3.幾天前我也去過那里。故將here改為there。

4.現(xiàn)在分詞做后置定語，故把played改為playing。

5.固定詞組：in one’s opinion以某人看來，故把on改為In。注意大寫開頭。

6.此處a place做先行詞，在后面的定語從句中做地點(diǎn)狀語，故把which 改為where。

7. information是不可數(shù)名詞，故把informations改為information。

8.固定詞組：make good use of好好利用---，故在use后加of。

9.固定詞組：take measures采取措施，故把measure改為measures。

10.副詞修飾動(dòng)詞，故把positive 改為positively。