Question

3．一家英語(yǔ)報(bào)社向中學(xué)生征文，主題是"十年后的我"、請(qǐng)根據(jù)下列要求和你的想象完成短文：
（1）家庭
（2）工作
（3）業(yè)余生活
注意：
（1）詞數(shù)100左右；
（2）可以適當(dāng)增加細(xì)節(jié)，以使行文連貫；
（3）開(kāi)頭語(yǔ)已為你寫(xiě)好
     I often imagine what my life will be like in the future．I think my life will be very different in ten years．I will be twenty-eight years old by then．I will have my own family．Probably with a lovely child．I hope I will work in a computer company as a program designer．I will enjoy my work and get along well with my colleagues，I will do a good job in whatever I do．In my free time，I will continue to take regular exercise，such as swimming，running and various ball games．On my holidays，I will travel around the world．In a word，my life will be much richer and more colorful．．

Answer 1

分析 本文是應(yīng)用文，根據(jù)所給要點(diǎn)給英語(yǔ)報(bào)社寫(xiě)篇征文，主題是"十年后的我"，主要要點(diǎn)：（1）家庭（2）工作（3）業(yè)余生活．屬提綱作文．在寫(xiě)作時(shí)人稱以第一人稱為主．時(shí)態(tài)以一般將來(lái)時(shí)為主．重要短語(yǔ)：What is sb/sth like？（某人/物怎么樣？…），in the future （將來(lái)），get along well with（與…相處融洽），in one's free time （在某人空閑時(shí)間），take regular exercise （有規(guī)律地鍛煉），around the world （全世界）．

解答 I often imagine what my life will be like in the future．
I think my life will be very different in ten years．I will be twenty-eight years old by then．I will have my own family．Probably with a lovely child．（家庭）I hope I will work in a computer company as a program designer．I will enjoy my work and get along well with my colleagues，I will do a good job in whatever I do．【高分句型】（工作） In my free time，I will continue to take regular exercise，such as swimming，running and various ball games．On my holidays，I will travel around the world．In a word，my life will be much richer and more colorful．（業(yè)余生活）

點(diǎn)評(píng) 提綱作文在寫(xiě)作時(shí)要注意內(nèi)容是否包含了所有要點(diǎn)．寫(xiě)作時(shí)注意準(zhǔn)確運(yùn)用時(shí)態(tài)，上下文意思連貫，符合邏輯關(guān)系，盡量使用自己熟悉的單詞句式，同時(shí)也要注意使用高級(jí)詞匯和高級(jí)句型使文章顯得更有檔次，平時(shí)需注意積累短語(yǔ)和重要句型．