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書面表達(dá)

　　假設(shè)你是李華，昨天學(xué)校為你們舉辦了十八歲成人儀式。請根據(jù)下列要點(diǎn)給你在美國的筆友發(fā)一封電子郵件，描述儀式過程并簡述你的感受。

1．成人宣誓；

2．感謝家長和老師的教育和培養(yǎng)；

3．老師送賀卡；

4．表演節(jié)目。

注意：

1．郵件必須包括以上要點(diǎn)，要適當(dāng)發(fā)揮；

2．詞數(shù)：100左右；

3．開頭結(jié)尾已為你寫好，不計(jì)入總詞數(shù)。

參考單詞：宣誓make an oath儀式ceremony

Dear Tom,

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Yours,

Li Hua

Answer 1

答案：略
解析：

Dear Tom, 　　It is great to receive your email. Now I’d like to tell you something that took place in my school yesterday. In the afternoon we held a growing-up ceremony for our coming 18-year-old birthday. At first we made an oath that as grown-ups we should have a sense of duty for our society from now on. Then we showed our thanks to our parents who had gone through hardships to bring us up and teachers who have been educating us patiently. And our teachers also gave us cards expressing their good wishes to us. Finally, we put on wonderful performances, singing and dancing. We learned a lot from the activity. I think it’s very important for us. I will remember the day in my life. Yours, Li Hua

提示：

寫作指導(dǎo)： 把握下列描寫場景作文常用的表達(dá)： We hold a ________ ceremony for _________. 我們舉行了……儀式。 We make an oath that… 我們宣誓…… We should have a sense of duty for our society. 我們應(yīng)對社會負(fù)起責(zé)任。 go through hardships to歷經(jīng)辛苦…… put on wonderful performances表演了豐富的節(jié)目 We learned a lot from the activity. I think it’s very important for us. I will remember the day in my life. 我們受益匪淺，它對我們很重要，我會銘記我生命的這一天。