Question

【題目】假定你是李華，你和你的留學(xué)生朋友Eric約定好下周日一起參加市里舉辦的中國國畫展（the traditional Chinese painting exhibition），但你因故不能赴約．請給他寫封郵件，內(nèi)容包括：

1．表示歉意；

2．解釋原因．

注意：

1．詞數(shù)120左右；

2．可以適當(dāng)增加細(xì)節(jié)，以使行文連貫．

3．開頭和結(jié)尾已為你寫好，不計入總詞數(shù)．

Dear Eric，

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Yours sincerely，

Li Hua

Answer 1

【答案】Dear Eric，

I feel terribly sorry that I can't attend the traditional Chinese painting exhibition to be held next Sunday with you. Therefore, I'm writing to apologize to you, wishing you could generously forgive my impolite behavior．

So attracted by traditional Chinese paintings are you that I guess you must be disappointed, for I'm afraid that I will fail to keep your appointment. You know it is the last thing I want to do. Unfortunately, my grandpa caught a serious cold several days ago due to climate change and he is still in hospital now. My family should take care of my grandpa these days, which is our absolute duty and fundamental responsibility. As a consequence, I can't make any excuse to be absent. I sincerely hope that you can understand my situation．

Once again, I am deeply sorry for any inconvenience caused and please accept my sincere apology.

Yours sincerely，

Li Hua

【解析】

達(dá)是一篇提綱類寫作。要求以李華的名義給留學(xué)生朋友Eric寫封郵件。

根據(jù)題干可知這是一篇書信類作文。寫作提要為假定你是李華，你和你的留學(xué)生朋友Eric約定好下周日一起參加市里舉辦的中國國畫展（the traditional Chinese painting exhibition），但你因故不能赴約．請給他寫封郵件，內(nèi)容包括：

1． 表示歉意；

2． 解釋原因。

我們所要做的就是用正確的英語把給出的要點(diǎn)表達(dá)出來。本作文中給出的要點(diǎn)比較簡略，故需要自由發(fā)揮的地方較多，解釋自己不能赴約的原因，注意語氣要誠懇。需要注意不要偏離文章中心。寫作時注意準(zhǔn)確運(yùn)用時態(tài)，上下文意思連貫，符合邏輯關(guān)系，一定要契合整個文章,不能出現(xiàn)文章脫節(jié)問題。盡量使用自己熟悉的單詞句式，同時也要注意使用高級詞匯和高級句型使文章顯得更有檔次。