Question

15．身體是革命的本錢，可中學(xué)生目前的健康狀況讓人十分堪憂．家長，學(xué)校，專家憂心忡忡．于是有人獻良策將體育納入高考．請結(jié)合實際談?wù)勀愕目捶ǎ�作短文一篇，將其發(fā)表．
注意：
1 短文詞數(shù)不少于100；
2 可適當增加細節(jié)，使行文連貫；
3 文章的開頭已給出，不計入總次數(shù)．
The fact that high school students are currently experiencing a sharp decline in health has aroused wide concern among parents，schools and experts．
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Answer 1

分析 這是一篇提綱作文，讓我們就將體育納入高考這件事．談?wù)勎覀兊目捶�，這需要我們發(fā)揮英語思維，將提供的信息用英語完整流暢的表達出來．寫作需要用第一人稱，時態(tài)主要是一般現(xiàn)在時，內(nèi)容要點包括：身體是革命的本錢，可中學(xué)生目前的健康狀況讓人十分堪憂．家長，學(xué)校，專家憂心忡忡．于是有人獻良策將體育納入高考．我們此篇作文分為兩部分，第一部分為總體介紹將體育納入高考這件事．第二部分為我的看法．第三部分為學(xué)校應(yīng)采取的措施．
重點短語與句型：
be  against反對
 by no means 決不
 it is one's responsibility to do sth做某事是某人的職責
provide sth for sb 為某人提供某物
高分句型一：The fact that high school students are currently experiencing a sharp decline in health has aroused wide concern among parents，schools and experts此句用了that引導(dǎo)同位語從句
高分句型二：To have this problem solved，some people propose that PE be included as a subject in the College Entrance Examination．此句用了propose虛擬語氣，should 可省略．
高分句型三：Only when one is in good health can he guarantee efficient learning．
                       此句only+介詞短語，主句部分倒裝

解答 The fact that high school students are currently experiencing a sharp decline in health has aroused wide concern among parents，schools and experts．（ 高分句型一）To have this problem solved，some people propose that PE be included as a subject in the College Entrance Examination..（ 高分句型二）（總體介紹將體育納入高考這件事）
I'm against the idea because it is by no means practical．Setting up standards for the exam alone may well be a hard task．It is far beyond our ability to manage such a nationwide exam in the sports field．
However，good health is an essential foundation of learning．Only when one is in good health can he guarantee efficient learning．（ 高分句型三）．（我的看法）
Therefore，it is schools'responsibility to help develop their students'awareness of the importance of keeping fit．Moreover，schools should provide sufficient sports facilities for their students to have regular exercise．（學(xué)校應(yīng)采取的措施）

點評 英語寫作是一項主觀性較強的測試題．它不僅考查學(xué)生的寫作基礎(chǔ)而且還考查學(xué)生在寫作過程中綜合運用語言的能力．在撰寫時要注意主謂語一致，時態(tài)呼應(yīng)，用詞貼切等．要提高英語寫作水平，需要兩方面的訓(xùn)練：一是語言基礎(chǔ)方面的訓(xùn)練，要有扎實 的造句、翻譯等基本功，即用詞法、句法等知識造出正確無誤的句子；二是寫作知識和能力 方面的訓(xùn)練以掌握寫作方面的基本方法和技巧．