Question

7．聯(lián)合國教科文組織就如何處理垃圾污染問題向全世界中學生征文．請以"Saving Our City"為題，寫一篇100詞左右的短文．
提示：l．城市垃圾的危害：污染環(huán)境，對健康有害．
2．你所在的城市是如何處理垃圾的：
（1）垃圾分類；報紙、玻璃的再利用．
（2）填埋有害垃圾；處理廢水、廢氣．
3．如何盡我所能，愛護環(huán)境、保護環(huán)境．

Answer 1

分析 本文屬于應用文寫作，根據(jù)所給要點以"Saving Our City"為題寫一篇征文，寫作要點：l．城市垃圾的危害：污染環(huán)境，對健康有害．2．你所在的城市是如何處理垃圾的：（1）垃圾分類；報紙、玻璃的再利用．（2）填埋有害垃圾；處理廢水、廢氣．3．如何盡我所能，愛護環(huán)境、保護環(huán)境．屬提綱作文．在寫作時人稱以第一人稱為主．時態(tài)以一般現(xiàn)在時為主．
重點詞匯：deal with （處理）；otherwise（否則）； pay attention to （注意）；For example（例如）；do one's best to do （盡某人最大的努力去做）；fight against （與…作斗爭）．
高分句型：1．If people breathe the polluted air or drink the polluted water，they may get ill．
                  if引導條件狀語從句，
                 2．The rest，which is believed to be harmful，is sent to a certain place and buried．
                  which引導一個非限制性定語從句，先行詞為The rest，主句The rest is sent to a certain place and buried運用了被動語態(tài)．
                 3．Laws have been passed ①to protect the environment，②so waste water should be and is treated before it is poured into rivers．
                  本句運用了被動語態(tài)，①不定式短語to protect the environment表示目的，②so引導結(jié)果狀語從句．

解答 It is very important to deal with the rubbish in cities．Rubbish must be treated properly，otherwise it may cause problems．It may pollute the air and water．If people breathe the polluted air or drink the polluted water，they may get ill（高分句型一）．
Our city has begun to pay attention to the problem．For example，rubbish is sorted．Some rubbish，such as newspapers and glass，is recycled．The rest，which is believed to be harmful，is sent to a certain place and buried（高分句型二）．Laws have been passed to protect the environment，so waste water should be and is treated before it is poured into rivers（高分句型三）．
We've been trying，but there is still a long way to go．We should do our best to fight against pollution．

點評 提綱作文在寫作時要注意內(nèi)容是否覆蓋了所給要點．寫作時注意準確運用時態(tài)，使得上下文意思連貫，盡量使用自己熟悉的單詞句式，使文章淺顯易懂，同時也要注意使用高級詞匯和高級句型使文章顯得更有檔次．