Question

5．請根據(jù)以下內容，寫一篇英文簡訊，投稿到�？�英文版．
寫作內容

時間：2014年2月 人物：三名外籍大學畢業(yè)生 事件：應聘到佛山政府就職 職責：給領導提供建議 搭建佛山與國外溝通的橋梁 感受：覺得大部分民眾對工作理解和支持 對工作時間不習慣 效果：引起了公眾關注 吸引了更多外國商人來佛山建廠 政府評價：他們的表現(xiàn)超過預期           將繼續(xù)引進外國人才

寫作要求
只能用5個句子表達全部內容．
評分標準
句子結構準確，信息內容完整，篇章連貫．
In February 2014，three university graduates from abroad were employed inFoshan government．They are mainly responsible for providing advice for leaders and build a bridge for communication between Foshan and foreign countries．They are happy that most Chinese people understand and support their work，though they are not accustomed to the working hours．Their work has drawn public attention and attracted more foreign businessmen to set up factories in Foshan．As a result of their good performance，the government officials comment that the foreign employers have gone beyond their expectations and they will continue to bring in more foreign talents．．

Answer 1

分析 本文是一篇提綱作文．根據(jù)所提供的材料信息，寫一篇英文簡訊．
寫作要點包括：1．時間；2．人物；3．事件；4．職責；5．感受；6．效果；7．政府評價．人稱以第三人稱為主．
重要短語：be responsible for （對…負責），provide sth for sb （為…提供…），be accustomed to doing （習慣于…），draw public attention（吸引公眾的注意），set up（建立，搭建），as a result of （由于），beyond one's expectations （超出了某人的預期），bring in （引進）．
【高分句型】
1．They are happy that most Chinese people understand and support their work，though they are not accustomed to the working hours．
這里是由though引導的讓步狀語從句，逗號之前是主句．They are happy that most Chinese people understand and support their work中是由that引導的賓語從句，作形容詞happy的賓語．
2．Their work has drawn public attention and attracted more foreign businessmen to set up factories in Fo shan．這里是由and連接了draw和attract兩個謂語動詞，動詞不定式to set up factories in Fo Shan作目的狀語．

解答 In February 2014，（時間） three university graduates from abroad were employed in Fo Shan government．（人物、事件）They are mainly responsible for providing advice for leaders and build abridge for communication between Fo shan and foreign countries．（職責） They are happy that most Chinese people understand and support their work，though they are not accustomed to the working hours．【高分句型】（感受）Their work has drawn public attention and attracted more foreign businessmen to set up factories in Fo shan．【高分句型】（效果） As a result of their good performance，the government officials comment that the foreign employers have gone beyond their expectations and they will continue to bring in more foreign talents．（政府評價）

點評 提綱作文在寫作時要注意內容是否包含了所有要點．寫作時注意準確運用時態(tài)，上下文意思連貫，符合邏輯關系，盡量使用自己熟悉的單詞句式，同時也要注意使用高級詞匯和高級句型使文章顯得更有檔次，平時需注意積累短語和重要句型．