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【題目】假如你是張萌，是一位高中生。iPad已經(jīng)成為你們中學生的新寵。用iPad既可以聽音樂，閱讀電子書，又可以玩電子游戲。請用英語給某報社寫一封信，談?wù)勚袑W生使用iPad的情況。新的內(nèi)容包括以下要點：

iPad給中學生帶來的好處；

iPad給中學生帶來的負面影響；

你對中學生使用iPad的看法和建議。

注意：1. 詞數(shù)100左右；

2. 可以適當增加細節(jié)，以使行文連貫；

3. 信的開頭和結(jié)尾已為你寫好，不計入總詞數(shù)。

Dear Editor,

I am a senior high school student, named Zhang Meng.

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Yours sincerely,

Zhang Meng

Answer 1

【答案】Dear editor,

I am a senior high school student, named Zhang Meng. Nowadays, it’s fashionable for young students to have iPads. Using an iPad, we can listen to music, download a lot of learning materials and read them. Obviously, it’s of great help with our studies, especially with our English listening skills.

Some students, however, bring their iPads to the classroom listening to music with earphones, and some playing video games, which makes teachers and students greatly annoyed.

In my opinion, the classroom is a place for studying, and concentration is terribly needed. Therefore, we should make good use of iPads and other modern communication tools to help with our lessons.

Meanwhile, schools should make some rules to instruct the students to use iPads properly.

Yours sincerely,

Zhang Meng

【解析】本文是議論文。本文討論的話題是學生使用ipad的好處和缺點。考生可以從ipad的便利性著手，如聽音樂，學英語，以及與他人的交流以及便捷地尋找學習材料等方面說明ipad的好處。負面影響可以描述學生使用ipad容易進行一些與學習無關(guān)的事情，如玩游戲等，會對學習產(chǎn)生不好的影響。最后不要忘記發(fā)表自己的看法和提出建議。

【亮點說明】

本文的構(gòu)思較為巧妙，脈絡(luò)清楚，句型也是變化多樣，并使用一些高級句式。如which makes teachers and students greatly annoyed.這樣的非限制性定語從句。另外還有一些高級詞匯，如concentration，terribly，make good use of等等。