Question

7．假設你是李華，你所在的學校正在舉行"校園最美教師"的評選，請以"A good teacher"為題，寫一篇演講稿，參加你校以此為題的英語演講比賽，介紹你所喜歡的英語教師王老師．
內容要點如下：
1．年齡：30歲；
2．外觀：戴著眼鏡…
3．品質：關愛學生，熱愛事業(yè)，責任心強…
要求：1．詞數(shù)100左右，開頭和結尾已給出，不計入總詞數(shù)；
2．可適當增加細節(jié)，以使行文連貫．
Hello，everyone．It is a great pleasure for me to be here today．I think my English teacher Mr Wang，who is 30 years old and wears thick glasses，is the most beautiful teacher in our school．He loves us very much and treats us as his own children．Mr Wang is a teacher easy to get along with．Patient and responsible，he is always ready to help those who are poor in English and encourages them to catch up with others．He loves English and really enjoys teaching．Learning English may be boring but Mr Wang has a special way to make his classes lively and full of humor．We make great progress with the help of him．So you see this is my dearest teacher Mr Wang．We all love him very much．
That's all．Thank you for your attention．

Answer 1

分析 這是一篇以"A good teacher"為題的演講稿．根據(jù)題目要求可知用第一人稱和一般現(xiàn)在時態(tài)．內容包括：一說明老師的年齡外觀以及主題；二介紹老師的品質以及學生對他的愛戴．
高分句型：
1．I think my English teacher Mr Wang，who is 30 years old and wears thick glasses，is the most beautiful teacher in our school．句子里who引導非限制性定語從句 is 30 years old and wears thick glasses，代指先行詞Mr Wang．
我認為我的英語老師，年約三十，戴著厚厚眼睛的王老師，是我們學校最漂亮的老師．
2．Patient and responsible，he is always ready to help those who are poor in English and encourages them to catch up with others．句子里Patient and responsible是形容詞做狀語，表示"耐心又負責"；who引導定語從句 are poor in English，代指先行詞 those； catch up with others表示"跟上"．
他耐心又負責，他樂于幫助那些英語不好的學生，鼓勵他們跟上其他人．

解答 Hello，everyone．It is a great pleasure for me to be here today．I think my English teacher Mr Wang，who is 30 years old and wears thick glasses，is the most beautiful teacher in our school．【高分句型一】（說明老師的年齡外觀以及主題）He loves us very much and treats us as his own children．Mr Wang is a teacher easy to get along with．Patient and responsible，he is always ready to help those who are poor in English and encourages them to catch up with others．【高分句型二】He loves English and really enjoys teaching．Learning English may be boring but Mr Wang has a special way to make his classes lively and full of humor．We make great progress with the help of him．So you see this is my dearest teacher Mr Wang．We all love him very much．（介紹老師品質以及學生對他的愛戴）
That's all．Thank you for your attention．

點評 考查提綱類作文．
審查書面表達題干中隱含的讀者對象和撰寫人，即搞清楚此篇文章是"由誰寫給誰"的．寫稿人是誰一般都已明確指出，給出形式假設環(huán)境中的"某人"，如"假設你是李華"，寫作時即用第一人稱"我"，即李華．而讀者對象有時沒有明示，要考生自己去進行判斷．