Question

【題目】假設(shè)你叫李華,聽說即將來你校任職的外籍教師David需要一名學(xué)生助手,你想自薦做他的助手。請你用英文寫一封自薦信,要點包括:

1.寫信目的;

2.你作為助手的優(yōu)勢;

3.表達(dá)期待。

注意:1.詞數(shù):100左右;

2可以適當(dāng)增加細(xì)節(jié),以使行文連貫。

Dear David,

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Yours,

Li Hua

Answer 1

【答案】Dear David,

I’m Li Hua, Chairman of the Students’ Union. It’s great to learn that you are coming to teach in our school as an oral English teacher next semester.

I was asked to write to you, recommending myself, a Senior 2 student, aged 17, to be your assistant. I’m a diligent student, who can use the computer skillfully and has a gift for communicating with others. What’s more, I’m an expert at spoken English and always ready to help others in need. I am confident that I can he helpful in your work and life in China. If you have any questions, please do not hesitate to contact me.

I’m looking forward to your coming.

Yours,

Li Hua

【解析】

本篇書面表達(dá)屬于應(yīng)用文，要求考生寫一封自薦信，自薦做他的助手。

第一步：審題

體裁：應(yīng)用文

時態(tài)：根據(jù)提示，時態(tài)應(yīng)為一般現(xiàn)在時和一般將來時。

結(jié)構(gòu)：總分法

總分法指把主題句作為總說，把支持句作為分說，并以這種方式安排所寫內(nèi)容。

要求：

1.寫信目的;

2.你作為助手的優(yōu)勢;

3.表達(dá)期待。

第二步:列提綱 （重點詞組）

grateful; ask to; look forward to

第三步：連詞成句

1. I’m Li Hua, Chairman of the Students’ Union.

2. It’s great to learn that you are coming to teach in our school as an oral English teacher next semester.

3. I was asked to write to you, recommending myself, a Senior 2 student, aged 17, to be your assistant.

4. I’m a diligent student, who can use the computer skillfully and has a gift for communicating with others.

5. What’s more, I’m an expert at spoken English and always ready to help others in need.

6. I am confident that I can he helpful in your work and life in China.

7. If you have any questions, please do not hesitate to contact me.

8. I’m looking forward to your coming.

根據(jù)提示及關(guān)鍵詞（組）進行遣詞造句，注意主謂一致和時態(tài)問題。

第四步：連句成篇（銜接詞）

1.表文章結(jié)構(gòu)順序：First of all, Firstly/First, Secondly/Second… And then, Finally, In the end, At last

2.表并列補充關(guān)系：What is more, Besides, Moreover, Furthermore, In addition As well as, not only…but (also), including,

3.表轉(zhuǎn)折對比關(guān)系：However, On the contrary, but, Although+clause(從句), In spite of+n/doing,On the one hand…,On the other hand… Some…,while others…,as for, so…that…

4.表因果關(guān)系：Because, As, So, Thus, Therefore, As a result

連句成文，注意使用恰當(dāng)?shù)倪B詞進行句子之間的銜接與過渡，書寫一定要規(guī)范清晰，

第五步：潤色修改