【題目】短文改錯(cuò)

假定英語(yǔ)課上老師要求同桌之間交換修改作文，請(qǐng)你修改你同桌寫的以下作文。文中共有10處語(yǔ)言錯(cuò)誤，每句中最多有兩處。每處錯(cuò)誤僅涉及一個(gè)單詞的增加、刪除或修改。

增加：在缺詞處加一個(gè)漏字符號(hào)(八)，并在其下面寫出該加的詞。

刪除：把多余的詞用斜線(＼)劃掉。

修改：在錯(cuò)的詞下畫一橫線，并在該詞下面寫出修改后的詞。

注意：1．每處錯(cuò)誤及其修改均僅限一詞。

2．只允許修改10處，多者(從第11處起)不計(jì)分。

Xiao Hua's father bought her the new bike the day before yesterday, which it made her very excited. So she rode it fast on the road. Seen a man getting close to her, Xiao Hua couldn't stop it and as a result, she knocked into the man. Being very kind, the man didn'tscold her in all. Instead, he told her how dangerously it was to ride a bike so fast. He asked her keep the lesson in mind. Xiao Hua felt regretful but ashamed. She promised to keep the lesson in mind for ever. Then, the man bent down and begin to repair her bike. After a while, he got them repaired. Xiao Hua was greatly moved. She thanked the man and left him happily. How an unforgettable experience she had that day!

【答案】

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【解析】

試題分析:本文為我們講述了小華得到了新自行車后的一次難忘的經(jīng)歷。

【1】第一處：當(dāng)一個(gè)可數(shù)名詞第一次出現(xiàn)時(shí)，用不定冠詞a/an,再次出現(xiàn)，才用定冠詞the。故把the改為a。

【2】第二處：本句中which引導(dǎo)的是一個(gè)非限制性定語(yǔ)從句，在從句中充當(dāng)主語(yǔ)，所以it是多余的。故去掉it。

【3】第三處：本句中的see a man getting close to her在句中做時(shí)間狀語(yǔ)，與主語(yǔ)Xiao Hua是主動(dòng)關(guān)系，現(xiàn)在分詞表主動(dòng)。故Seen改為Seeing。

【4】第四處：not…at all是固定表達(dá)，意思是一點(diǎn)也不。句意“那個(gè)男的很好，一點(diǎn)也沒(méi)有斥責(zé)她。”故把in改為at。

【5】第五處：本句中的危險(xiǎn)的在句中做表語(yǔ)，應(yīng)該用形容詞表狀態(tài)。故dangerously改為dangerous。

【6】第六處：ask sb. to do sth.表示要求某人做某事。故在keep前加to。

【7】第七處：本句中的regretful和ashamed是并列關(guān)系而不是轉(zhuǎn)折。故but改為and。

【8】第八處：本文敘述的是過(guò)去的事情，而且此處的begin應(yīng)該和前面的并列謂語(yǔ)bent形式一樣。故begin改為began。

【9】第九處：此次指的是他為小華修理她的自行車，是一輛自行車。故them改為it。

【10】第十處：在感嘆句中，how后面只有形容詞或是副詞；what后面除了形容詞，還會(huì)有名詞。故How改為What。

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